I love the way this was formatted and written. It sounds quite like a prophecy you night read in an old myth or story.
The idea of judgement was shown really well. The message was made really clear without sacrificing the style/quality of writing. My favourite lines are probably "The arrogance of human lies shattered / as they kneel before a microbe" (and honestly the whole of this stanza), and "the corona virus was just a scout, / an entire army lurks ahead"
I like the idea of the corona virus warning people to change how they act and the idea that it is a "guardian of the earth" really fits with the significantly reduced amount of carbon emissions globally.
This was beautifully written and simple to read, so thanks for writing
Points: 433
Reviews: 25
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