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Re: Those Days...
Hiya! Space here for a review! I really did enjoy this poem, especially lines like "As if I am the only horrible embryo in this dark and cold universe" (I ...
Jan 16, 2018 -
Re: Miserable Minutes
Hiya! Space here for a review. This story truly broke my heart, and by the end, I felt a deep sympathy for this boy. In only two paragraphs, you captured ...
Jan 16, 2018 -
Re: An Annoying Alarm
Hiya! Space here for a review. XD This is wonderful. I relate 100%. This was so funnily written, with a humorous melody, and I liked how you put exclamation marks ...
Jan 12, 2018 -
Re: My Happy Mask
Hi! Space here for a review. Let's start with why I clicked on it. The concept of masks is something that I generally mention when writing about things like sadness ...
Jan 12, 2018 -
Re: A Message to Bullies
Hiya! Glad I was tagged in this! You said it was written by you when you were twelve, and that being I was impressed and delighted by the grammar and ...
Jan 12, 2018 -
Re: Life
Hi! Space the Snickerzdoodle here for a review. ^^ I really liked this poem while I was reading it. It has a nice lyrical feeling to it, and it made ...
Jan 12, 2018 -
Re: 739 Miles
Hi! Space here for a review! I personally liked this poem, I know the pain of missing someone far away. It felt very real, with the exclamation point on "Ugh!" ...
Dec 2, 2017 -
Re: i used to be human
Hiya! Space here for a review. I really love the fonts, and paired with the lyrical words, I loved it. Yes, there is one spelling error (breath instead of breathe), ...
Dec 2, 2017 -
Re: Why do I do this
Hi! Space here for a review! :3 I really liked this poem when I was reading it, it felt very emotional and real, and sadly, relatable. To me, I read ...
Dec 1, 2017 -
Re: From Different Perspectives of a Murder
Hi! Space here for a review! I absolutely LOVE this kind of poem! It's so creative and interesting, and the topic makes it even more so. You captured the two ...
Nov 29, 2017 -
Re: A Passive Aggressive Thank You Note
Hi! Space here for a review! ^^ This poem caught my eye because of the name. It works so well with the story and, to me, draws the reader in ...
Nov 29, 2017 -
Re: trickster
Hello! Space here for a review! I really enjoyed this poem. It's short, yet somehow it gets across a good message, easily and poetically. I love the rhyming, too. As ...
Nov 29, 2017 -
Re: Monster
Hiiii! Space here for yet another review. (I didn't review the last one you wrote yet...oops. I'm sorrryyyy. ;-;) I really like this poem, it has many 'themes' or 'lessons' ...
Nov 29, 2017 -
Re: I Planted a Seed
Hi! Space here for a review. ^^ I know this was written a year ago, but I just thought it was so pretty that I couldn't not-write one. (Did that ...
Nov 27, 2017 -
Re: a burst of affection from sixth grade
Hi! I'm Space, here for a review. ^^ I absolutely love the imagery, metaphor, and descriptions in this story. It's so heartfelt and the details are so well-written. You set ...
Nov 27, 2017
