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StuckOnEarth

  • Other » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Those Days...

    Hiya! Space here for a review! I really did enjoy this poem, especially lines like "As if I am the only horrible embryo in this dark and cold universe" (I ...

    Jan 16, 2018
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: Miserable Minutes

    Hiya! Space here for a review. This story truly broke my heart, and by the end, I felt a deep sympathy for this boy. In only two paragraphs, you captured ...

    Jan 16, 2018
  • Poetry » Humor, Literature Re: An Annoying Alarm

    Hiya! Space here for a review. XD This is wonderful. I relate 100%. This was so funnily written, with a humorous melody, and I liked how you put exclamation marks ...

    Jan 12, 2018
  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: My Happy Mask

    Hi! Space here for a review. Let's start with why I clicked on it. The concept of masks is something that I generally mention when writing about things like sadness ...

    Jan 12, 2018
  • Other » General, Realistic Re: A Message to Bullies

    Hiya! Glad I was tagged in this! You said it was written by you when you were twelve, and that being I was impressed and delighted by the grammar and ...

    Jan 12, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Life

    Hi! Space the Snickerzdoodle here for a review. ^^ I really liked this poem while I was reading it. It has a nice lyrical feeling to it, and it made ...

    Jan 12, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: 739 Miles

    Hi! Space here for a review! I personally liked this poem, I know the pain of missing someone far away. It felt very real, with the exclamation point on "Ugh!" ...

    Dec 2, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: i used to be human

    Hiya! Space here for a review. I really love the fonts, and paired with the lyrical words, I loved it. Yes, there is one spelling error (breath instead of breathe), ...

    Dec 2, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Why do I do this

    Hi! Space here for a review! :3 I really liked this poem when I was reading it, it felt very emotional and real, and sadly, relatable. To me, I read ...

    Dec 1, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Horror Re: From Different Perspectives of a Murder

    Hi! Space here for a review! I absolutely LOVE this kind of poem! It's so creative and interesting, and the topic makes it even more so. You captured the two ...

    Nov 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: A Passive Aggressive Thank You Note

    Hi! Space here for a review! ^^ This poem caught my eye because of the name. It works so well with the story and, to me, draws the reader in ...

    Nov 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: trickster

    Hello! Space here for a review! I really enjoyed this poem. It's short, yet somehow it gets across a good message, easily and poetically. I love the rhyming, too. As ...

    Nov 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Satire, Dramatic Re: Monster

    Hiiii! Space here for yet another review. (I didn't review the last one you wrote yet...oops. I'm sorrryyyy. ;-;) I really like this poem, it has many 'themes' or 'lessons' ...

    Nov 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: I Planted a Seed

    Hi! Space here for a review. ^^ I know this was written a year ago, but I just thought it was so pretty that I couldn't not-write one. (Did that ...

    Nov 27, 2017
  • Art » Romantic, General Re: a burst of affection from sixth grade

    Hi! I'm Space, here for a review. ^^ I absolutely love the imagery, metaphor, and descriptions in this story. It's so heartfelt and the details are so well-written. You set ...

    Nov 27, 2017


Depression is messin with the wrong person over here cuz in the months that I was doing better I was sharpening my weapons for this war.
— Kaia