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Stripeslife

  • Poetry » Horror, Lyrical Re: Here in the Dark

    I actually really liked this poem! I love rhyming poems, but I usually am not a big fan of every line or every stanza being started the same way. I ...

    Jul 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Chasing Clouds

    I really liked this poem. It was very enjoyable. Nitpicks: "My heart keeps telling me the perfect lie; That life won't leave me with a bitter cry." In these two ...

    Jul 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Best Friends.

    I really enjoyed this poem a lot. It reminded me a lot of when I was a kid and everything was easy. By the way, my first friend's name was ...

    Jul 17, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Umbrella

    I am in love with this story! Anyway, lets get on with the review. Storyline: It's raining and this person is talking about how their umbrella is torn. I really ...

    Jul 16, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, Realistic Re: Her Broken Soul.

    Okay, so I was about to start crying and was like, why the heck is this under humor? This is definitely not humorous, but then I got to the end ...

    Jul 16, 2014
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Horror Re: The Forgotten- HSC (feedback would be amazing)

    Okay, so I am now declaring that you have to write a sequel. I really liked it and demand one! Anyway, now for the review part. It was a very ...

    Jul 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: I Knew

    Hello. Stripeslife here to review! So let me start by saying this is an excellent work of poetry. It was a real joy to read, so much so I have ...

    Jul 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: One and One

    There are no words. The poem was amazing. I can find nothing wrong with it. It was beautiful. Thank you. I didn't know what "sans" meant and so I looked ...

    Jul 16, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Jamie Foster Chapter 1

    Okay. Stripeslife here to review. I have to say I really enjoyed this. There are a few things that I would suggest being revised. 1. At the beginning, the hook ...

    Jul 16, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Turning the Key {Chapter 1: Kiki}

    I don't have any nitpicks that IamTraunt hasn't already pointed out. Plot (so far): This plot seems very interesting. It is a unique concept that, at least I, don't find ...

    Jul 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Noticed

    This poem is very good. There is little that I can find wrong with it. The only real suggestions I can make are: 1. In the third line, I would ...

    Jul 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: What is...?

    I read this and was just like "woah". It was very good. I like things that make you think. It pretty much sent shivers down my spine when I read ...

    Jul 15, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Still Waiting on You

    This was a very good poem. I really liked it. I really enjoyed how it was formatted. The bullets and the one word sentences. I also found it quite cool ...

    Jul 15, 2014


Percy fell face-first into his pizza.
— Rick Riordan, The Mark of Athena