Hi Booshian! This is a nice poem about a first puppy love. You were kind of right about that fact that it's kind of cheesy. I would've like if you describe to us what he looks like or how you feel when he kisses you or just how much you love him. Other than those minor issues, you seemed to be on the right track.
Your Friend,
The Lone Writer
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