StoryWeaver13

Hey! Okay, so this has a glimmer of potential, but it's lost in the muddle of your lacking rhythm and your very restricting rhyme scheme. The concept is pleasant and ...

Hey Rarity, StoryWeaver here to review! So I tend to warn people before I review anything involving poetry or romance; seeing as this just so happens to encompass both, I'll ...

Brilliant. Granted, I'm doing the math in my head, and while I'm far from being a genius (particularly far from being a math genius) I think that by six or ...

Hey chenaja, StoryWeaver here to review! First and foremost, however, let me warn you that I am a tough reviewer, particularly when it comes to poetry, and all the more ...

Hey Kora, I'm StoryWeaver and I'll be reviewing today. Keep in mind that I'm a picky person when it comes to poetry, and I can honestly say that I have ...

Hey Arctic! Well this poem is a little rough around the edges to say the least, and I think that it's largely due to the restricting rhyme scheme. Not all ...

Well, I was a little confused by the momentary rhyme scheme that was then discarded after the first stanza, and then picked up, and then changed, and then dropped and ...

I love the organic and living quality of this poetry; it's stripped away to a bare level of artistry that works very well for the concept. It's constructed of a ...

Hey tgirly! I actually thought this was pretty swell; it's got a unique, kind of upbeat vibe to it, huh? And the last four lines really hit this poem out ...

Hey SkyeJane! First of all, thank you for reviewing my poem; I thought I'd return the favor! So I really like the idea of this. My favorite lines were: "I ...

Hey! Well, I should probably warn you in advance, I am very harsh on love poems, and this will likely be no exception. You saturate this poem in a vat ...

Hey there! Well, this is interesting, but it definitely has some work that needs to be done. First and foremost, this is a LOT of dialogue; while that isn't necessarily ...

Despite the fact that I have ADD and am perpetually falling through one rabbit hole to the next, I'd say that this poem is very, very distracted - even for ...

Hey indie! Well this is a nice poem, very natural in its format and style. It's rare that I commend someone on writing a successful romantic poem, but this is ...

Hey, Zawaa! StoryWeaver, here to review. "Such a simple question[[,]] no? But the answer [[-]] well[[,]] that's another story. All my life I had thought that I had all the ...