StoryWeaver13

My favorite part of this was the flow that you had, which was really solid. Sorry that I'm getting insanely tired of romance, especially in poetry, so I won't hover ...

*Comments in bold, grammar stuff in red I walked up to the tree. Here M om had hung a ribbon for every death as far back as she knew. I ...

"I read your story," he says, grinning a little and giving a small chuckle. I nearly choke on my tea. I feel my eyes get wide and my mouth squeeze ...

~No Stranger To My heart~ Even though I haven't seen you in awhile some kind of punctuation (; or . or - ) I kind of feel like you could ...

Samantha was on the ground, covered in dirt and sweat, her eyes bulging. I climbed out of the hole , brushing off my dress and taking in a long deep ...

Okay, so we've all written poems about poetry on our unoriginal days (honestly I've probably written about a dozen of these darn things) but I still liked this. It had ...

Haha, I like this. It's got a lot of humor to a relatively dark situation, which I for whatever reason find hilarious. My one real problem is the fact that ...

This was cool, and you've had this reviewed pretty well by the people before me so I'll try not to repeat what they've already said. And actually I have a ...

My problem with rhyming poetry is that you have to do it right, or it sounds sing-songy, which was kind of the problem in this one. It has a word ...

Everyone was scrambling to set up the party before the Mayor arrived to send out his speech about how hard we have worked through the seasons and why winter should ...

I like the topic, because I know it's a problem a lot of people have. Being a gymnast I personally have my own anorexic moments. Your real issues are all ...

Caleb dropped his hand and sighed. He swore he could almost hear the gentle flick of a page turning from behind him; ‘But it couldn’t be, could it?’. Probably better ...

I don't like romances (they're riddled with melodrama and cliche) and I have no clue what compelled me to read this. But actually, I wasn't too disappointed. This was well-written, ...

I like this, the third stanza especially. There were some typos and misspells here and there, so clean this up, and then my real criticism is that you have a ...

First? This picture is really cool. Now on the actual poem, I thought this was pretty good as well. I've never really minded spiders and thought webs were pretty, so ...