StoryWeaver13

I found this a little generic. What I mean is that it's a decent poem, but it's nothing new. It expresses cliche subject matter without bringing depth or substance to ...

Oh, odd one, I like this. The whole thing is clever - the message behind it, the subtle descriptions that give us just enough to concern for your character, and ...

Okay, so the first lines I thought, "Oh, great, yet another poem about writing poetry. How original." *eye-roll* But I must say, this is beyond wonderful. It's beautiful, really, and ...

"The man has disappeared. Alice feels panic rush through her, if she fails to hit the button, he will murder her! She can’t die, not yet, not now! Not with ...

Interesting start...definitely eerie and compelling! It makes you want to read more, which (of course) is the purpose of a prologue, so I have to say that it's a job ...

asdflhawefoihwef I don't understand, Dreamwalker, how you can consistently write such brilliant poetry; but you do. I'm extremely jealous...but that's beside the point! This is a very well-written poe

Technical errors: bent* corners, not "bend." And* instead of "ANd" (obviously haha :) ) The other stuff: I really like this. For such a short piece it really packs a ...

On the technical side: "Shinning" should be "shining." I don't understand why "You" is capitalized, unless it's referring to God or something similar, in which case, ignore this correction. On ...

This is a good start, but it felt rushed. I would've liked to see it develop more slowly, so that we could get to know your character further, and most ...

Cute! I really like this. It would be a brilliant children's illustrated story too, I think. It's adorable and witty and while there are places where the rhythm was a ...

Dreamwalker, I swear I keep seeing your name come up, always linked to some incredibly good poem. This wasn't any sort exception, and for such a short poem, it managed ...

Hello, here to review! :) "I sometimes win, she sometimes will win," < This line is not only incorrect grammatically, but it's also a little blunt and bland. I'd consider ...

I think dreams are soo interesting, so I like reading through this and trying to pick apart your subconscious (that sounds really creepy, doesn't it?). In any case, while this ...

Color me intrigued...I think the other reviewers have done a pretty splendid job of dissecting this and helping you out, so I'll try not to repeat too much of what's ...

This is pretty dang swell, I must say. It's simple but elegant, and that's what makes it work - it feels natural and pure. There's a reason that this is ...