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  • Other » Horror, Humor Re: Complaint letters to Count Von-Draco about consumption of own babies.

    Hey Blackwood/ Carina, Black here for a quick Review Day Review for ya! Okay, I'll be frank: This piece was ridiculous and I found it sad for some reason. There ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Character Teaser: The Masters' Profiles, Sage Lionheart and Raine Khlarra

    Hey Aquilla, Black here for a quick Review Day Review! Okay, so first off, I'm insanely impressed: However I'm not sure if it's in the area where you want it ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Fantasy Re: Pan's Story. Part II

    Hey Wholesome, Black here for a REALLY quick review for ya! Okay, so I'm not going to complain: It was a great size. Not so long as to bore me, ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Shadow~ Chapter 2 + Homo Flacus description.

    Ooookay, hey Shadow Wings/ Pegasus, Black here for a nice review day review. So, usually I start a review by trying to encourage my writers, and point out their strong ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Romancing The Devil: Chapter Six

    Hey Katy, Black here for a quick Review Day Review. So first off, this was pretty good. Obviously, after reading just a few lines, I can see that this is ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Alone

    Hey Homeschooled, Black here for your requested review (sorry I took so long to get back to you on this -I was really, really, really busy). Okay, so first off, ...

    Jul 24, 2013
  • Short Story » General, Romantic Re: She.

    I've been having trouble with writing over-sized reviews that NOBODY has the time to read. Right now I'm working on dumbing down my reviews a bit, making them a bit ...

    Jul 20, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Breathing

    Hey Dream! Black here for a real quick comment/ review. First off: I have to admit, this piece definitely was an emotional/ dramatic piece. Very nice job there. It is ...

    Jul 16, 2013
  • Other » General, Realistic Re: Normal

    Okay, hey Shadow, Black here for a quick comment/ review! Okay, so first off: I don't agree with what you have to say here. When people say 'I'm not normal' ...

    Jul 16, 2013
  • Other » Supernatural, General Re: Lucifer

    Real quick review/ comment incoming. Okay, so first off I'd like to note that I AM religious . . . and I think that you've got your idea of Lucifer ...

    Jul 14, 2013
  • Other » General, General Re: Anger

    Hey Imaginator! Black back for your second review! :D Okay, this time my suggestion that you place this piece in a thread is going to be slightly different. As you ...

    Jul 13, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Other, General Re: Motivation

    Okay, I know I'm ultra-super-duper late on this, but I thought I'd drop by for a review (got picked for the santa thingy and all). So first off, FireHeart is ...

    Jul 13, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic Re: Identical: Chapter Three - Reactivity

    Okay, hey Paige, Black here for your requested Review! So first off: I loved this piece. Partly for personal reasons (such as, it gave me a look into a life ...

    Jul 13, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: A Fresh Start

    Hey Hockey . . . just thought I'd drop by for a super-quick comment/ review! First off: I thought this was really good. Your use of emotions, mixed in with ...

    Jul 10, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: All is Well, Perforce.

    Hey Skorlir, Black here for your requested review! Okay! So this was really good. Your grammar was EXTREMELY amazing, with virtually no mistakes that I was able to find (truly ...

    Jul 10, 2013


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