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Re: A Good Day to Twi-Hard
Er, okay. Black here for a review. First off I will scream to the world that I can't stand Twilight (In any form). Second off I will tell you that ...
May 7, 2013 -
Re: A Change In the System
Okay, Black here for another review! I'm right now thinking that your screen writing is much better than your story writing, but this is still good. Your dialogue (Duh) is ...
May 2, 2013 -
Re: Russia's Children- Chapter One
Okay, so Black here for a quick review! First off: Nice work, I feel that you're not too familiar with English (You skip and miss-use words that a person really ...
May 1, 2013 -
Re: A Love story Gone Wrong- Part 2
Okay, so Black here for another Review! First off, again, your writing was nice, but this time it wasn't as good as last time, by a good bit. You're on ...
May 1, 2013 -
Re: I Used to Run [tentative]
Okay, hey Indie, Black here for a Review. Nice work, it was interesting, though a bit hard to read, and quite well written. The problems are mainly in the grammar ...
Apr 30, 2013 -
Re: delete
Okay, Black here for a Review! Okay, I can see on sight, that you are not a terribly experienced writer (But I can also tell that you're not inexperienced either) ...
Apr 29, 2013 -
Re: Excerpt from NaNo novel
Okay, Black here for a review! First off: Interesting, let me note here that I'm working on a book for NaNo as well (Camp NaNo though) so I understand this. ...
Apr 29, 2013 -
Re: Ramblings of a Curious Observer
O.o Black here for a Review! First off, amazing work, you write really well, and portray your point spectacularly! I couldn't have done better, it's hard to tell whether it's ...
Apr 29, 2013 -
Re: Scatty Cat III
Okay, Black here for ANOTHER review day Review! Okay, again your writing is very chaotic and somehow childish . . . But you're on your way, this was more interesting ...
Apr 28, 2013 -
Re: Love
Okay! Black here for ANOTHER review day Review! All right, besides the fact that this was all one massive paragraph this was pretty good . . . Interesting, your grammar ...
Apr 28, 2013 -
Re: Scatty Cat
All right, Black here for another review! Okay, this piece is actually better than the other one I reviewed, it feels more like a novel's outline to me, though a ...
Apr 28, 2013 -
Re: Conckle's Backstory By Me
Okay, so, Black here for a Review Day Review! Okay, so this was . . .um, odd. Your main problem is that this is really hard to understand . . ...
Apr 28, 2013 -
Re: Tinkering for Love
Black here for another Review Day Review! Okay, so I don't usually do poetry (Reviews or writing) but here I am. Okay, so this was an interesting piece, I'll say! ...
Apr 28, 2013 -
Re: Penny
Black here for a Review day Review! Okay, so first off I'm going to make a special note and mention that this is a REALLY small piece . . . ...
Apr 28, 2013 -
Re: Adventure time review
Okay, Black here for a Review day Review. Okay, so nice work . . . I am, I must note, totally unfamiliar with 'Adventure time'. . . . (It's funny, ...
Apr 28, 2013