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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Stand

    Hello there, well done on this piece it's very informative and sophisticated. If more people though like this maybe we'd have a better world then we do today. We use ...

    Oct 7, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Rarely Beautiful End

    This is truly amazing, i love your imagery on heaven. But like lordgluzman said you do need to change the title. Being a christian myself i really like this poem. ...

    Oct 7, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Void of Beauty

    Amazing simple stunning, I really liked the words you used they definitely make people think and want to read more. Far better that love by the lone, doomed tree Was ...

    Oct 7, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Winter Road

    Well first off you must do two reviews when submitting a piece, just thought I'd inform you since you haven't done any reviews. I really liked this it was full ...

    Oct 7, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Hey Babycakes

    Incredibly done :smt038 This was a powerful piece, I really loved it. I'm so into vampires it's pitiful, but this really amazed me. I really can't find any mistakes because ...

    Oct 7, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: To an Unloved Rose.

    Hello there, This poem from short and simple I loved it, full of meaning and very sweet. I wish I could write poems like this but, I can only write ...

    Oct 7, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Goodbye

    Hello there wisemann210, I am sick so I'm sorry if this isn't as good of a review as you'd like. I found this poem really moving it seems like a ...

    Oct 7, 2008
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Werewolf's Bite

    Oh my goodness!!! This is amazing you must keep working on it, I am so in love with it already. It's so original and out of the ordinary, so much ...

    Oct 6, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The music

    Hello there StarDuster, I'd like to say well done on this piece, it speaks to me. I love how you describe it, every sense detailed. I love music and found ...

    Oct 6, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Stories of the Wind

    Good day to you Oreorulez21401, I'm happy to say I enjoyed your poem. It was short yet so deep, I think of this subject all the time. I, myself am ...

    Oct 6, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: My sweetheart

    This was really cute :D All I can say is, Those gorgeous qualities that's how you spell gorgeous ;] Cutious and simple Don't know what word you were trying to ...

    Oct 6, 2008
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: I Will Follow You Into The Dark

    Good day Embroswyn15, There were some mistakes but, most of them have been corrected so I'll just say I really enjoyed this. Though i think of Renesmee way differently then ...

    Oct 6, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Keeping the Dead Company

    Good day AnAbstractHeart, I really enjoyed this but there are some things you may need to edit. corrections/suggestions in bold Oh darling, darling, It seems you found me out! --add ...

    Oct 6, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Tightrope Walking

    Good day to you Eimear, I really enjoyed your poem, it's so original and shows a point of view rarely thought of. I can understand the tightrope walker's feelings of ...

    Oct 4, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Dwindling Fire [New: A picture depicting the climax]

    Oh my. This has truly amazed me, The plot...everything. You didn't tell me too much or too little of the beasts, I imagined those terrible beings. I find myself in ...

    Oct 4, 2008


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