Published October 1, 2008
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Amazing simple stunning,
I really liked the words you used they definitely make people think and want to read more.
One of my favorite parts, simply well done
Sorry I can't give a better review then this my annoying brother is getting on.
So have a nice day, I look forward to reading more of your work
With all due respect,
Mackenzie
Wow. The language made me shiver, no-one in my school seems to own a dictionary so it seems so new to me =). I really liked this even though I only half-understood it, but I'm a bit of an idiot so it's to be expected lol. The whole thing was WAY better than anything I could ever write and I enjoyed it.
*applause*