SteppinRazor

Hey I'm sorry if it threw off the flow but I wasn't trying to rhyme there haha my bad

Brooklyn and Tyler.. I love these names! I like the start it's already interesting and I can't wait to see what goes down!

please don't ever leave. I couldn't be alone again now that I've met you. that was sweet, I've never heard of Calypsoo but I'm about to google him/her so I'll ...

This was cute! Great rhyme although it was a bit short, but it was perfect anyway.

Wow I totally saw this play out in my mind! Great job! I wanna read the long version now! Kait sounds like a tough girl!

I’m just overreacting and it’s just the branch’s of a tree scraping against my window haha! that happened to me once! I was so terrified! but anyway I like this ...

I could just feel sorrow, to find that it was all a dream! That's happened to me before and it sucks! I really liked this hope can be like a ...

Damn this is a romantic son and I love it. Seems like the person is on cloud nine and honestly who wouldn't want to feel this way. I hope to ...

I really liked this, I'm a closet romantic and I felt every moment of this write. To have someone feel this way about you, just makes you feel warm inside.

Wow. Bravo. I Loved the imagery, it was gruesome in my head at one point and my imagination totally went haywire BUT yet I couldn't stop reading it! Very good ...

I really liked this. I may not have interpreted it correctly but I feel like don't expect much. I should know better then to expect from others even my own ...

hey kaedee! thanks for the feedback hehe i know its not the greatest prologue lol ill work on should i just make a new post for chapter 1? or do ...