StealTheWorld

Awesome job. I liked the imagery, the feeling, everything. While I get picky over using more than one language in a poem (I don't know why) I think your use ...

I really, really like the ideas on this. The double man could mean a lot, really. He could have two sides to him--strong and weak, as you mentioned--or he could ...

Wow... This was beautiful. When I first clicked on it, I thought it would be about some sort of dreamer that wanted to be more. But then I read through ...

Hey there! I have to admit, I'm a huge sucker for pieces like these. I love when people acknowledge that there are many who may not be able to do ...

Hey there! I'd like to start off by saying that the ending was wonderful. I don't know why I loved it, but I did. Anyways... I have a couple issues ...

Hey! DarkHeart, at your service! :) Okay. First, I'd like to say that I enjoyed reading this. I liked some of the repetition and just the idea about goodbyes not ...

This was adorably funny :D I love the images you painted and the silly little rhymes. Especially "What you did was stinky like a fish." The ending, oh my. Her ...

I love this. It doesn't state any reason for this person wanting to leave. They just do. It adds a bit of mystery that just shouldn't be solved--like we should ...

There's a typo on the third line. It uses the word "us" twice. I can really relate to this. It's a bit embarrassing to admit it, but I'm the forgettable ...

I was listening to "Never Too Late" by Three Days Grace on repeat for hours on end. I didn't realize just how well this poem would fit that mood when ...

Short and sweet :) I like that. I think it would flow better as a poem. That way, you could put breaks a pauses to draw certain parts out. For ...

I really, really enjoyed this. The tone, specifically was extremely fascinating to follow. I love how the speaker seems so patient and encouraging at times while tired and sympathetic at ...

Hey there!! Well, this poem was well-written and had great imagery. It was rather dreary when I pictured it, but very appealing at the same time. The capitalization of Rose ...

So, I've come to my senses with a bit of a wake up call. I saw a poem with a review by you immediately after I posted my comments and ...

I'm sorry, but this was just...I don't even know what. I couldn't understand most of it. I found that you're trying to prove a point by using senseless similes and ...