StealTheWorld

hi there, Mastermind! and welcome to YWS :) i'd like to begin my review by congratulating you on creating such a powerful piece. the world is indeed in need of ...

this is beautiful. i love the formatting--from 'pound, pound, pounding' to 's p a c e'--all of it just makes the imagery and voice way more vivid. now i DID ...

hi there :) i'm stealtheworld. before i get started, i'd like to say that this poem has the potential to be really good. i think i can help you take ...

this is a rather late welcome, but that's alright i think. welcome to yws! i'm stealtheworld, or any variation of that. call me whatever xD to start things off, i ...

from the very first line, i just knew i was going to like this ^.^ i KNEW. stealtheworld/dark is back for a review. i'm a bit rusty (okay, a whole ...

hey there, fearless :) i don't want to point out every teeny error, because those are easily fixable. i think there are just a few missing or misplaced commas, so ...

Hey there, Ossum :) Great username, by the way. I'm sorry in advance if this review isn't up to par, but I'm a little bit rusty. I'll try my absolute ...

Okay, so. I thought this was a serious poem and I was about to jump in with a few nitpicks (because I have no sense of humor when it comes ...

Okay, so I don't normally review multi-chartered works on this site, but I found myself rather compelled to write one :) I don't recall many grammar, punctuation, etc. errors, but ...

I like the tune and everything, but the lyrics sound a little too repetitive. Every other verse, you only change a few words around to make it different from the ...

Hey there, Pompadour! I was ridiculously enraptured by this piece. More so than I usually am when reading a particularly good work of yours. Keep it up. However, I've got ...

I honestly don't have much to say right now, but...I really, really liked this piece. It was so emotional and the combination of imagery, title, topic, etc. was just great. ...

This certainly brightened up my day. I've been verbally abused for speaking my own opinions of gay marriage because some people think it's wrong to have differing views. So...I kind ...

Happy Review Day from DarkHeart!! :) First off, wow. This was really, really good. In my opinion, that is. At first, I was a little intimidated by the length, but ...

Good afternoon (at least it's afternoon for me...)! Okay, so I'd like to start off by saying: oh my i love this. The first stanza just drew me in entirely. ...