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Re: Right here
Hey there again! Starleene here! I’m so excited to read another one of your works! Yay! “we stand together smoke billowing from your mouth the grey air speaks the words ...
Jan 23, 2013 -
Re: wish i were a ghost
Hey there! Starleene here! First off, I wanted to welcome you to YWS! We hope you enjoy it here! Well, I'm here to review your work! Let’s get started! Before ...
Jan 23, 2013 -
Re: Harmful When Swallowed
Hello there! Starleene here! I have come to leave you a review! “I want for you to say, who's that french maiden in that accent of yours, unsullied, shameless goo ...
Jan 23, 2013 -
Re: ashes
Hello there Persy! Starleene here to leave you a lovely review! Let’s jump right in, shall we? “From the ashes they say cities rise and people find the best of ...
Jan 23, 2013 -
Re: In Memory
So…we meet again Hannah! Well then, let’s cut to the chase. I am ready to review! Go! “Leo (his English name) told me the legend of the heart-shaped lake a ...
Jan 23, 2013 -
Re: Beautiful Disaster
Howdy Purple! Starleene here! Once again I am delivering you a wonderfully, thoughtful review! So then, let’s begin! Right off the bat, I notice that all of your poems tent ...
Jan 23, 2013 -
Re: Isolated
Hey there again! Starleene here! I have arrived for another review! I hope you’re ready! 3…2…1…Go! Alright, I was going to say that I notice that your caps butting seems ...
Jan 23, 2013 -
Re: Untitled
Hey there Purple! Starleene here! As requested, I am here to review! So then, let’s begin, shall we? I thoroughly enjoyed this piece of work. Many poets attempt to combine ...
Jan 23, 2013 -
Re: A Letter Home
Hey there! Starleene here! I have come bearing gifts of review! I’ve read your work and have done an in-depth analysis and I would like to share my finding with ...
Jan 23, 2013 -
Re: Opinionated Hummingbird
Hello there! Starleene Here! I am ready to review your Opinionated humming bird! I would like to start off by saying that the title if very artistic and draws the ...
Jan 23, 2013 -
Re: Fly
Hey there! Starleene here! I just stopped in to leave you a review so let’s get started! “Open Eyes.” The e in eyes doesn’t need to be capitalized. “A soft ...
Jan 23, 2013 -
Re: Quiet
Hey there! Starleene here! First off, I noticed you were new to YWS and wanted to extend a warm welcome! Second, I noticed your work and I decided to pop ...
Jan 23, 2013 -
Re: Solitude
Hey there! Starleene here! I wanted to review this piece because it sounded fun and I thought I would get a laugh out of it…I was right. “ I'ts grimy ...
Jan 22, 2013 -
Re: Lightning Royale Chapter - 1
Hey there! Starleene here! Blakey I am here to deliver you a review! I’ll try to keep it short and sweet! :D “Charlie didn't know that the reckless mistake he ...
Jan 22, 2013 -
Re: The Walk Alone
Hey there! Starleene here! Who’s ready for a review! I hope you said you because I’m about to give you one! :D Let’s take this paragraph by paragraph, the story ...
Jan 22, 2013
