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Re: The Ocean's Inkwell
Hey there Way! Starleene here with yet another review! Your piece is long so I’m going to cut to the chase and begin. …story may be. Tales of dragons and ...
Jan 28, 2013 -
Re: Confrontation
Hey there Way! Starleene here! I have come like you requested I just hope you know what you’re getting yourself into! “Moonlight shone down on the unending highway as a ...
Jan 27, 2013 -
Re: A worthy dweller
Hey there! Starleene here! I’m here to review your work, so buckle up and get ready! “…unaware of is his surrondings, his life, and even himself,but If a widening of ...
Jan 27, 2013 -
Re: Team 101 - Chapter 01
Hey there! Starleene here! I have come to review your work! I am pretty blunt with something but it's for the good of the author! Constructive critisism helps you become ...
Jan 27, 2013 -
Re: Pangs of past
Hey there Blakey! Starleene here! It’s review day! And I can’t wait to review the piece you have here! I know you said it’s your first poetry piece but I ...
Jan 27, 2013 -
Re: Warriors fallen.
Hey there! Starleene here! It’s review day! I came across your piece a couple days ago but I wanted to save my reviews for today, so here it is! “They ...
Jan 27, 2013 -
Re: Worlds Apart Chapter One
Hey there! Starleene here! It’s review day and you were at the top of my list! I hope you enjoy the review! Let’s commence! “The evening light barely leaked through ...
Jan 27, 2013 -
Re: Wonderland
Hey there! Starleene here! First off, I just want to welcome you to YWS! We hope you enjoy it as much as we do! So let’s begin this review! Right ...
Jan 25, 2013 -
Re: The Realization
This will probably be the shortest review I ever give you but, as in all my others, I have given it great consideration. Dr. Seuss once said, “A person’s a ...
Jan 24, 2013 -
Re: Motivation
Hey there! Starleene here! I know you’re not looking for a review but when I read through this I was like “I need to review this.” I went all zombie-eats-brains ...
Jan 24, 2013 -
Re: I might not live tomorrow
Starleene here! I have come to deliver a review! Yay! So let’s begin! “If I die tomorrow, leave my possessions wrapped in ice and splendor, so that they might freeze ...
Jan 24, 2013 -
Re: Fragments
Hey Purple! I think you should have known I would sniff out your works, so let's see what you have here! There are only two things that I want you ...
Jan 24, 2013 -
Re: Survive
Hey there! Starleene here! I thought I would pop in and deliver you a review! Let’s begin! “Scars dance across her skin Slowly showing you a picture,” I really like ...
Jan 24, 2013 -
Re: Memory Re-write
Hey there! Starleene here! I have come to deliver a review! So let’s begin! “On the first week of lab I took the NightCat home to BioFive.” There should be ...
Jan 24, 2013 -
Re: Self Destructive People
Hey there! Starleene here! I noticed your piece a couple days ago and have since then be reviewing it. Because of how long it is, I apologize at the size ...
Jan 24, 2013
