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hey :) i think that Clo pretty much covered everything but there was one thing that was a little confusing. He was as nimble as any other eighteen year old ...

hi hi :) on to chapter 2 ;) "I won't be here when you wake up tomorrow or Monday, I'll be at the station i think that you should put ...

hey :) This was sooo good :) it may have resembled Twilight a bit, but not as much as some might think ;) (ok, i should tell you that i ...

hey :) your poem was great :) while reading it i thought that i was at a tea party and we were all wearing corsetts :) :) (not that corsetts ...

hi :) welcome :) your poem is very good :) i only have a few...suggestions of my own to fix it up a little. 1) I kept on reaching, pulling, ...

i see a trend in a lot of your work. a lot of it is about love. but that is besides the point. onto the critique: 1) a lot of ...

this is a great start to your fantastic story :) :) :) i only have a few grammar changes: 1) You probable wouldn’t be going for a notebook if I ...

ok so this poem is like romantic and painful and heartbreaking all at once. some of the parts didn't work, but a lot of the parts did. this is great ...

i thought this was really good :) there were a few things that i noticed though. 1) "I am a body dripping pearls through the pores in my skin," i ...

um...i think that if you don't like someone's comment then pm them, and if you don't want to do that then please don't use foul language. it makes the readers ...

OK, you have a bunch of different grammatical errors and that really takes away the greatness of your poem. Other people have already told you these errors, but you haven't ...

wow :) this poem was absolutley amazing :) Thanks for the comment, but I've always sucked at poetry that's why I try and stick to fiction! psha. i think that ...

ok, for bigbadbear, your HAVE to finish velocity. it is so good and you will just love it :) i read it this year and if you have any questions ...

hey :) this poem is funny :) it shows how almost everyone feels about going to the dentist :) i only have a few suggestions :) When they’re done with ...

hey :) great poem :) here are my thoughts :) To show of my curves this should be off in stead of well...of. I've tried being really thin So maybe ...