Spearhawkdude

Hey, It's Thomas here. :D This is really good. I like how you let us learn so much about the main character, without sort of saying it out loud. The ...

Hello again madam, I have come to bless you with my genius and my amazing handsomeness. This part of work is amazingly good, I can only imagine how much work ...

I don't usually open up works which use 'u' instead of 'you'. But I'm glad I did any ways. This essay was really quite good and it was really thought ...

I'm sorry it took a while for anyone to review it, they were to busy laughing their arses off, like I am right now. This might just be the best ...

This story was actually quite nice, the punctuation wasn't all in place, and there were a few sentences which could have benefited from rephrasing because in places it got slightly ...

Hey Hsarver! :D Killjoy03's review pretty much sums it up. But all I wanted to add to what went right in this poem. You really made me feel for the ...

This is really good!I like how you talked about how some other person, perhaps a lover, has unknowingly put bounds on you, and how he put bounds on HIMSELF by ...

This poem was really good, but the grammar wasn't that good. In the first line:' I'll always *though* you as my...' This should have been 'know' or 'think of you' ...

This is the best essay I've ever read! I used to live in India when I was younger. India has one of the largest homeless populations in the world. Every ...

The stuff cheetah said pretty much sums it all up. This is amazing. I find the Roman and Greek gods amazing and you sir (or ma'am), made them even cooler. ...

This entire essay depended on the first paragraph. That's different, but it could have worked amazingly if the first para. was more describing, you said that we were supposed to ...

The idea of this story is really good, but you sort of handled it the wrong way. :( The grammar was, I've never said it before on this site but, ...

The other comment from Cheetah was pretty good, and I don't need to add anything in that aspect of reviewing, so I'll talk more about the context instead. This was ...

This is really, really, really good. I think it's so nice of you to make something like this for a friend, who puts the mask on and lives every day ...

Let me just start off by saying this is amazing! I myself see things like this in my nightmares, and I just can't get myself to write it down. I ...