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Re: Blank Soul
Hello, Sounds here, dropping by to say a few words. I thought that this was a very thought-provoking piece and thoroughly enjoyed it. I get the feeling that it's about ...
Jun 28, 2014 -
Re: The Lake(story made in 3rd grade)
What a pleasant read. I wish I still had all of my stories from when i was younger, not that I would want to post any of those disasters... I ...
Jun 28, 2014 -
Re: Insomnia
Hey, there! I really feel like I can relate to this poem in so many ways. I'm always up at odd hours, and even when I do manage sleep, I ...
Jun 28, 2014 -
Re: Bond of Memories (Chapter 1)
Oooo Harry Potter! :D One of my favorite fandoms. Ahh, the gold old days where one did not have to worry too much about grammar mistakes and whatnot! It's always ...
Jun 28, 2014 -
Re: They man the hedges.
There are so many things that come to mind when I read this, I really don't know where to begin. This is a really great poem. I really do picture ...
Jun 27, 2014 -
Re: Patterns of Light
Hey there! I, too, am someone who loves the stars in the sky, outer space, and other similar things. This was a very nice read, I enjoyed it from beginning ...
Jun 27, 2014 -
Re: The Eccentric Eight
Hey, there! Sounds here to give you a quick review. Right off the bat, I spot a grammatical error: 'there's' should be 'there are', because you are speaking about teachers ...
Jun 27, 2014 -
Re: Wheels of Freedom
Hey, there! Sounds here to give a quick review. First off, this was a very interesting read. I felt it was well-written; I don't have any nit-picks in that regard. ...
Jun 27, 2014 -
Re: Certain People
Wow, I love this. This has to be one of the most powerful poems I've read so far. It is hard to say certain things to certain people. I for ...
Jun 26, 2014 -
Re: Cigarettes
This is a very interesting poem. To be honest, I wasn't sure what to expect when I clicked the link to take me here to read it. I've never smoked, ...
Jun 26, 2014 -
Re: "See"
This poem, like your last, I feel like it speaks to me. Nobody likes to feel invisible or insignificant, or a punching bag so to speak. Those who have never ...
Jun 26, 2014 -
Re: "Moonlit Sacrifice" - Part I
Such a lovely piece of work. Your style is unique, not something seen every day, and honestly I don't think that's a bad thing at all. Personally, I enjoy it. ...
Jun 26, 2014 -
Re: In My Arms, You'll Be Safe...
This was very chilling (no pun intended... ok, maybe I do intend it...) and I was hooked to it from beginning to end. You seem to have a knack for ...
Jun 26, 2014 -
Re: Black Clouds Chapter One
This was a very enjoyable piece, pleasant to read. What I liked the most had to be the way the characters interacted with each other, however I do think it ...
Jun 25, 2014 -
Re: I Want a Heart
Wow, man, this gave me chills. I love the dark twist you put on such a cherished tale, and was totally hooked from beginning to end. Your way with words ...
Jun 25, 2014
