SoundsOfLife

Hello! I was wondering if this will become the front cover of your upcoming novel? The colors are nice and the faces looking at the mad looking doctor makes me ...

Hello there! Okay first off, I love this poem! It makes an emotional impact, I can really feel what you wanted to portray. There's one part that I did notice, ...

I'm a critic when it comes to short, simple, and to the point poems like this, by critic I mean I've only reviewed two short poems here on YWS, so ...

Hey there! I know that this has been posted on here for a while now, but this piece of lyrical work is really good, so I couldn't pass up the ...

Hello there! I must say that this piece of short poetry is awesome! When I finished reading this for the first time I noticed that you're nine years old, which ...

Hello there! It's kind of late for me to say this, but Welcome to YWS Panther! Now for the reviewing part. This little bit of poetry made me read it ...

Okay. First of all. If I was walking thru a book store, and saw a book with the tittle "Why Does My Name Start With an M and end with ...

Alrighty then Here it goes For the first part For the first part, I had a little trouble picking up the correlation to the first paragraph. Anywho Let's start with ...

Story's like this make me wonder how America became this way, or has it been like this since the beginning? Who knows. All I know is that I'm glad I ...

In the beginning I was thinking that your going down a trauma based mind control story, I think that because thats how it goes that I hear from victims that ...

If I didn't know any better I would of thought that I was reading a short book preview. I don't see any language violence or mature content anywhere. I wish ...

I is not ego, not the sum of your unique experiences, just, democratically, whoever???s talking, a kind of motel room, yours till the end??? that is, of the sentence. The ...

I was slightly confused in the beginning, but it got better as I read along. The grammar is good, Can't seem to find any flaws in that area. The pace ...

I think this could be a good song. I'm trying to come up with a good beat to follow the words, I know it could be an awesome song! This ...

I like this one, it might be because I know what person feels like, not to be dead but to feel like the entire world is against you. Or it ...