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Hello, justtheboy! I'm Griff, here to review this work of yours. First off, like therealme said, the point of view changes were confusing. The beginning of the chapter is from ...

Hi Pompadour! GriffinClaw, here to review this lovely work of yours! Wow. This is really good. The imagery, the descriptive wording, the similes and metaphors are all fantastic. My favorite ...

Hello again, BloodInk. I think I'm just stalking your works now. Don't be alarmed. This is a great piece. Very philosophical. How did you start thinking about this? The title, ...

Hello BloodInk. We meet yet again. XD Griff here to review...you know the drill. Well, this is a change. French! I know, I know, it's obvious, but it's still awesome. ...

Hey BloodInk. Just for the sake of getting this out of the Green Room, I'm going to attempt a review on this work. This piece is interesting. I enjoyed it ...

Hey Messenger! It is I, Griffin, to review this lovely work of yours. First off, this is an interesting idea you have going. A mysterious monster attacking a young girl ...

Hi StoryWeaver. I'm Griff, here to review this lovely work. I just...wow. I can't even...I'm speechless, really. This is amazing. Truly fantastic. I love the metaphor about the doctors and ...

Hello aidanp! Welcome to YWS. I'm Griff, here to review this lovely work of yours. First off, I like your style. I like how you put the first word in ...

Hello again DragonLily! It is I, the great Griff, to review yet another of your works! Wow. This is awesome. I love how you did this, displayed the argument about ...

Hello Omi1. GriffinClaw here to review this lovely poem. First off, I really liked this poem. You described the feelings of loneliness and sadness very well. I can personally relate ...

Hello DragonLily! I'm Griffin, pleased to meet you! Here to review this lovely piece of yours. :) First off, I enjoy the refreshing change of a happy poem for once. ...

Hello Crystal Pony! GriffinClaw, here to review! Alright. I'm just going to say right now that this may sound a little harsh. Are you ready for this? There are so ...

Hello, live1out2loud7! I'm Griffin, I don't think I have met you. Welcome to YWS! I am here for a review for this piece. Okay. So I like this piece quite ...

Hello Industrio! I'm Griff, here for a review! I'm just gonna gush praises here. For having been written in 5 minutes, this is pretty darn good! Despite it being so ...

Hi Iggy! Griffin, here to give a short review for this short poem. I love this. It is so short and meaningful. It is like a pocket poem, short enough ...