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You have to review other people's work on this site in order to gain more money. I don't know if you already found that out, but I thought I'd let ...

I can totally relate to this. It is really well done and I love that you found a way to put this in word because I've been trying to forever ...

I like it. The only thing I would suggest changing is the 8th line, get rid of when. Other than that nicely done.(:

Ahhhhhh, I see. And I meant to put Vinnie. I'm sorry. :/ I know how annoyed I would be if someone put the wrong name down.

Thank you! It was kind of created by the feeling of losing someone very close and important to me. I've never been married, or been through exactly what Charlie was ...

Thank you! It was kind of created by the feeling of losing someone very close and important to me. I've never been married, or been through exactly what Charlie was ...

I did try to do that, because I hate the fact that people think this way, but everything I put sounded corny. Most of my work is very sad and ...

Oooooooh, this is so cute and sad. I really love the fact that you make something like this with such a short poem. The only thing I would have mentioned ...

Beautifully done my dear.(:

This is so cute.(:

This is amazing. I think is one of my favorite poems on this website so far. The only thing I noticed was you made a few mistakes in the second ...

Beautiful story, dude. The ending was so sad it had me in tears.(;

wow, this is really, really good. I want the next chapter, pretty, pretty please?

I like this. The mistakes that I notice have already been pointed out, and know how annoyed I get when people continue to point the same thing out over and ...

This is wonderful, and I am totally left speachless. Ugh!!! I just love this poem. Beautiful, beautiful job. (: