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Re: Your full of it
Hey hey! How are you? Ready for a review? This feels real. And that's a big complement. The thoughts are all over the place just like a human would have. ...
Dec 5, 2016 -
Re: we hung bottles.
Hey hey Amelie How are you? Ready for a review? I'm not that good at reviewing poems, so bare with me. "one day we would both stand in the street ...
Dec 5, 2016 -
Re: Black Sapphire
Hey Hey! How are you? Ready for a review? overall thoughts: I like this A LOT. I like the characters, the house, the sort of bad guy gang with good ...
Dec 4, 2016 -
Re: I Always Do
Hey Hey! How are you? Ready for a review? I like this a lot, I mean, Scarred, this is a creepy sinister story, well done! Be proud! "Knives, bloody knives, ...
Dec 4, 2016 -
Re: Your Own Universe
Hey Hey! How are you? Ready for a review? This is good. This is really good. And I don't even play the piano. I think you do? I'm not good ...
Dec 4, 2016 -
Re: Tie the Strings
Hey hey! How are you? Ready for a review? I'm going out on a limb here, but I think this poem represents someone that was, wait for it, FRAMED! Okay, ...
Dec 3, 2016 -
Re: Shut Them Blinds Boy
Hey Hey! How are you? Ready for a review? Now I will review and interpret this, but you have to tell me what kind of person I am after, deal? ...
Dec 3, 2016 -
Re: Monster
Hey Hey! How you doing? Ready for a review? First thought: OH LA LA!!! That last verse was such a good ending!! hold on I have to read it again ...
Dec 3, 2016 -
Re: Forget Me
Hey Hey! How are you? Ready for a review? or more my opinion on what this means? You said that it's vague for a reason, so that people could associate ...
Dec 3, 2016 -
Re: coffee
Hey Hey DEEPROSES! how you doing? Ready for a review? First of all: WOW. seriously! Although I hate the taste of coffee, I loved the taste of this! I'm not ...
Dec 3, 2016 -
Re: Insidious: Prologue
Hey Hey MATT! How you doing? Ready for a review? Overall thoughts: This is good. Very good. I liked the action, the fast pace and the overall chapter. "Okay! Our ...
Dec 3, 2016 -
Re: Champions, The Citadel of Light: Chapter One
Hey Fanta!!! Found this awesome story and I am all ready to review....(gosh, I haven't done this in a long time) I liked it a lot, especially the whole war ...
Dec 18, 2015 -
Re: The Return of Magic: Part One Chapter Seven: Kalihr
Lau here for a review! Except some grammar mistaks which I think were just typos: " immense chamber chamber full of Mages, " "Lnadone" You did a good job! I ...
Nov 18, 2015 -
Re: NOVEL : Mohit--The Person Who Changed Me * Chapter 2*
Hello Eros! Here for a review. I enjoyed it and I'm intrigued, i love the way you write "did not" instead of didn't. I don't know, guess it gives it ...
Nov 12, 2015 -
Re: The Return of Magic: Part One Chapter Six: Another Assassination Attempt.
Lau here to review! " Ingred, and Iris all entered combat with varying levels of confidence." Hold on. Confidence? How? They learned this secret world in less than a day! ...
Oct 5, 2015