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Hello! :D Great imagery in this, I love it! Especially "roaring pillars of crimson flame,". :D (I may be wrong, but this is the same volcano that killed Hisster's wife ...

Hello, yet again, felistia! :D Yay! I'm the first one to review, and I'm caught up with you!! :D His heart nearly stop upon seeing the sight around him. Stop ...

Hello again, felistia! :D I'm glad to see yet another great chapter! I like how each chapter isn't really dragging on (I have a problem with that in my novels) ...

Hello felistia! :D I really love this, the plot, the characters - everything. I can't wait to read more of this!!! Now on with the review! :D :D grey ocean ...

Hello! :D What better place to start than the beginning...? :) I love your description in this, and I only have one nitpick! :D Scorpus shouted You use this twice ...

Hello! :D This is a really emotional piece - and since it's based off your life, it's kind of like a memoir. (kind of). Since it's kind of like a ...

Hello! :) I love your description, it's awesome and a good idea when talking about the forest! I really could "see it, smell it and hear it". :) Great job ...

Hello! :D I love this - and I can relate so much. (Except yesterday and today I was on a writing spree! xD) You really summed up a writer's problems ...

Hello! :D Even though I do not really like softball (tried it for 2 years), I totally know where you are coming from with this. It's the same for me ...

Hello! :D This is cute story! I love how there is constant dialogue and interrupting. It's very funny, and your title definitely drew me in! :) Now for the review... ...

Hello! :D This is WONDERFUL! I love it! :D I only have a couple of nitpicks... :) She walks away from Her pack She walks away and never looks back ...

Hello! :D Once again, I am impressed with your use of description and imagery! Great job with that! Now on to the review... ;) In this poem, you use rhyming ...

Hello! :D You definitely have a hand for description! Maybe a bit much at times, but I like it! It gives you a kind of 'trademark' as a writer. ;) ...

Hello! :D Welcome to YWS, I hope you enjoy it here! First of all, I must say I like the idea of your poem. It can be 'taken' many different ...

Hello! :D So I saw this in RFT, and I just had to come review it. :D It's pretty awesome. ;) Here's what I found... she looked back and fourth... ...