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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Waiting

    Hello... here to give my two sense on this little piece here. I agree with the below commenter (not even sure that is a word) about the poem giving too ...

    Aug 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: "In Search of Peace"

    This is a beautifully written piece and very enjoyable to read. I love the picture you posted with it as well. It fits the poem so well its scary, the ...

    Nov 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Narrative Re: my home is not a unit

    I am guessing that this poem was written in the sense that a home meant "family" or the strength of being as one. Like everyone said i would capatilize the ...

    Nov 4, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Victim

    This was an awesome piece of work. My internet has been down lately so im glad that the first poem that caught my eye was a good piece of work. ...

    Nov 2, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Boys.

    I don't think it took guts to post this whoever judges you on this should be a shamed of themselves. You like what you like and that's that. you're born ...

    Oct 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Midnight

    Love the simplicity in this poem. Also the complexity of the midnight hour. Such questions would arise from such a unique hour. I feel that if a philosopher were to ...

    Oct 21, 2013
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: Hyssop and Vinegar

    I love this a lot. I love reading these kind of things from someone elses point of view from a story, they are always interesting to read. I remember back ...

    Oct 21, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Empty Spaces

    Amazing work you have here. The metaphors and imagery of this poem are excellent. I just love poems that have anything to do with the night or the moon it ...

    Oct 21, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: What Happened

    Wow this was a very powerful piece of writing here. Its very dark and depressing and i love it. The fact that you can actually feel the emotion of the ...

    Oct 21, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: My Body is Not Poetry

    This is a very beautifully written piece here. Everything about it just screams and pulls you in. The setting, emotion, atmosphere everything was caught and displayed beautifully. I feel that ...

    Oct 20, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Old Roads

    This is amazingly written piece. This poem projects alot of emotion and pain which are poems that i particularly love to read. The line "I looked at broken glass, and ...

    Oct 19, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: The perfect night.

    While reading this chapter i experienced something so weird. I usually don't like reading this kind of material but for some reason this was very enjoyable to read. I love ...

    Oct 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Black Rose

    This is an awesomely written piece. The descriptiveness of the flower was some of the best i have ever seen. The first line i absolutely love I don't think it ...

    Oct 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: As You Leave

    I love this piece. It's perfectly written everything is captured perfectly the emotion the setting everything. The only bad thing about it is that's its nitnlongerbi seriously could have read ...

    Oct 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Satire, Teen Fiction Re: Bathtub, Chicken, Daddy

    I agree with the others when they say that get a humorous feel to it but the poem is rather confusing. I think this would have been better as a ...

    Oct 17, 2013


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— Rick Riordan, The Lightning Thief