SkyeJane

Heya Jordyn,SkyeJane here to review this un-categorized piece of yours. I actually really like the feelings you have put in this piece; they ring so true and are I think ...

Hi there Ariana,what a lovely song/poem you have here! You said it was sappy,but I feel like it rings so true that it doesn't come across that way at all. ...

Hi Abid! I'm Skye doing a review for you. This piece is really great. As it was said before,it's a tad but hard to read because of the lack of ...

Heya there Saphire! I agree with you..if you wrote something,you might as well get n opinion or two on it. So here is mine. First of all: Structure.....because of how ...

Hi there BarretBenedict! I was sort of confused at this. I really wanted to like it because it has so much potential,but it seemed almost joky in places.....maybe that;s just ...

Heya there Aquestioning!! tsk tsk tsk.....errors I see *frowns*...nah just kidding,it happens to all. This was really interesting and it used some very powerful language here that I really love ...

Okay Alana,here I am to review. First of much dialogue!! This makes a review a bit tricky... You said that you just wrote this for pretty much no reason and ...

Wow btm! This poem definitely has a powerful meaning. When I read the first line I really didn't know where it would go,but after I read through a couple times ...

Hi there Rosan! I actually think this should be a song. I felt a distinctive melody the whole way through and I really thought that just the story being told ...

Hi there Thothmagic. SkyeJane here to review this poem. So I think that what you had here was something that I could really relate to......the general theme being;you once were ...

Heya there Audy,I won't go too much into the grammar stuff like Animal,but I will review. The first thing I thought when I was reading was,even though all I really ...

Okie Dokie! I thought this was very,very interesting and anew idea....I've never seen anything addressed to a cat before. In this poem I see how frustrated and desperate this man ...

Hey there Story Weaver! I think this is a really great piece you wrote here. It feels almost like it could be something you would here being said by the ...

Wow! This really has some power to it. I was riveted the whole way through by the end I felt my own emotions grow dark and full of swirling feelings. ...

Hey there Animal!! Okay first thing that I want to say is...you did't finish this did you? It makes it a little bit tough to review because of that but ...