Skye

First, I would like to thank all three of you for reviewing my poem. It has been so long since I wrote poetry; this is the first thing I've written ...

They're only my second most favorite series ever! I don't care if they're for younger kids, they are written and illustrated beautifully. If you haven't done so already, I sincerely ...

Thanks a bunch for the reviews! I'll answer your questions now and I'll work on revisions ASAP. Length: My paper was actually the longest in the class! Description (or lack ...

I like this a lot! There is a nice tension about it until the very end. I wouldn't change a thing!

This is very cool. Haunting and original. I love it!

I'm the opposite of Myriadne, I liked the last four lines the best. For some reason, the first 4 lines didn't do much for me, but the lst 4 made ...

Like was said before, I liked the first and third stanzas, they were really attention-grabbing. And I too wonder what a salad day is.

Thanks for the suggestion, you two. Reading it over again carefully, i can see what you mean. REVISED: Light. It fell on a quivering, sensitive mouth. Lips. Lips were mouthing ...

Beautifully done; it really captures the emotion of writing. By the way, have you ever done NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month)? Because that feeling you described is exactly like that.

I agree with Nate, and, personally, I like the original form the best, it breaks it up nicely. Great poem! ~Skye Demon

This is beautiful; I absolutely love it! But what is more rewarding, then traveling from who you are to who you can become? I love that stanza...beautiful...

I got the impression myself that the Yellow Towel Person was male, but that's just me. I really love this! Very interesting, and it made me laugh out loud! ~Skye ...

I love it! I just have one question: Does this take place before or after the last story snippet you posted? Just wondering ... You write beautifully; I can really ...

Same thing everyone above me already said, and my congrats on writing a great poem! :wink:

Moving... It's nicely written, and a powerful message.