I don't know what those other people are talking about, this poem is really good. And as far as the whole pointless thing goes, who said you had to write for a reason? (I'm not saying you didn't write it for no reason, but I'm arguing against their point of view ;P)Can't one just write for the sake of writing? That writing is their passion and that is reason enough? Forming phrases and sentences, using beautiful words, not so that something might be said but something might be read and spoken aloud, so that the sweetly woven words might delight the tongue and enchant your very lips? Maybe they're just jealous lol.
You have a wonderful knack for poetry, but I have to say, I hope none of your real feelings stem from this at all. It may be good, but it's sort of depressing =( that's my only thing.
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