Sinaryn

Wow. This is fantastic. The imagery is breathtaking, and I especially love the last stanza. "Far Far " You conveyed so much meaning with just two words. Amazing. Truly amazing. ...

I really like the idea of this poem, but it comes across as a bit too cute and childish to make the point you're trying to. Don’t ever say it’s ...

I can understand many of the thoughts and feelings that were poured into this poem. I struggled with depression for quite some time before I got help. However, that is ...

Hello! I like this story, but I noticed quite a few errors and some points on which I'm not quite clear. The grammatical errors I can point out later if ...

Hahaha, this was great. I loved it! Wow, I've always wanted a boyfriend, and this just might lead me to finally getting one! Does it count if your boyfriend is ...

This is amazing. The imagery, the flow, everything is perfect. How beautiful a poem is, even in the form of prose! How clever it is to disguise a poem that ...

I love this, and I can definitely relate. My notebooks are precious things filled with my hopes and dreams. In them are my drawings, stories, and poems that formed my ...

Hahaha, I can relate to this very well. Thank you for putting my feelings into words for me! It's a great poem. I just see a few slips of rhythm ...

I am not sure I understand this, but I wish I did. I feel that you have created something too deep for me to grasp. I would not say this ...

Wow. What a wonderful work! The imagery you have presented is beautiful. I especially love the line "Guarded by his words". Even across the internet, from wherever you may have ...

I have never seen Doctor Who, so I don't entirely understand this, but I think it was fantastic. I see no need to use periods simply because you capitalize each ...

This is great. I love the imagery. There are only a few errors I see. There shouldn't be a comma after "seashells;" it adds an unnecessary pause. Also, there should ...