SimonCowellLuver

All you need now is some music. Ha! LOL I really liked trhis i think it could make a awesome song. I think you can be a good song writer. ...

I really like this its very well written. I must say. All you have to do is be careful on your punctiouation. Sorry is that is spelled incorrectly. i am ...

I like your story you got here it is very interesteresting but it needs dome work to but i can help you with that later right now I like your ...

I like this it is very well written. I have no problems with this story. Happy writing SimonCowellLuver :)

I like it but only leave one space between each lines. Why did you put double spaces that is stupid. But like your poem. SimonCowellLuver :)

I really don't like the repition its kind of lame. No offense. I like the poem it was well thought out. I think you need to add some punctionuation in ...

I think this is a great poem just my opinion is i like rhyming poetry it makes it flow better. I still like your poem.

Uh The rhyming isn't so good I think because it doesn't go through the whole poem just at the beginning. If you want a nice flow in your poem keep ...

Will you fight my demonds away, no matter what it takes? Its Demons. Will you dry my wet wepping eyes? Weeping. Watch your spelling and grammar usage and you will ...

I like your story you got here it is awesome I think. To me there is nothing wrong with it. Keep up the good work. Gothgirl01

I agree with Cheeky Coconut on this one. But I like some of it too. Keep up the good work

This sounds really interesting. If you have a chance Pm me more of this I want to read it Good luck Gothgirl01

I like this I don't think any critiquing is needed here. Just some few grammar errors i saw but the content of the story is well written. Keep Up The ...

Not the best thing to start off with. But its good. I enjoyed reading it. I suck at poetry too so don't worry you will get the hang of it. ...

I Loved it. Nothing to critique from me. Well done