SilentRain

Hi, This is Rain, so, I like this, Here are my nik-picks: She let him be her escape , from all the pain and grief . L et his comforting ...

Well, I really like this. I just don't think that it sounds good with all the "but I love you"s at the end of every line, maybe at the end ...

Well, I really enjoyed this poem! For a first atempt at this style you have done very well... The subject of the poem, and the way you used personification to ...

I have that happen to me some times, I'm lying awake awake in the middle of the night and BAM! a poem hits me:) Ok, so I like this poem. ...

Now I have checked it and they are all 5, 7, 5 syllables. Ok, so first I will say this, the syllables aren't all right... Whispering winds speak With sweet ...

I like this, it is short and yo make your point, I do hve a few things to say though... The Lord above created you for me to love .

Well, I like this poem a lot, just go a feww suggestions... So when it started to fly away, I came too.

Wow, I like this, I really haven't got anything to say that you need to change most of it was intinsional I believe... other then this "Pin-pricks of stars are ...

Well, I really really like this poem! I love the disctipsions, They sing to each other With scratchy paper voices, They sing each other to sleep. This is my favorite ...

Ok, so, I have a habit of picking abart a poem so get ready... Frist of I have to say that I really liked this poem, I haven't read anyother ...

Well, this is like a lot of poems I have read... You should add more about why you feel this way, what made you feel this way, what was done, ...

Hmmm, I like this, its unusual... Just a few comments and suggestions, (no spell cheak, sorry). I wish that I could touch your face, or smell you r lush brown ...

Ok, so, I'm here as requested, if there is anything spelled wrong in this review I;m sorry, my spell check button is playing hide-and-seek and I just can't find it! ...

Hello, I really liked this poem, there are a few things I found kind of rocky, Which I will point out, but over all I liked it, The rhyme was ...

Well, it is a good poem, maybe go more into it, what do you love, their eyes? their hair? Their smile? stuff like that... < Kiss me, Crave me, Want ...