To The Mad Hatter.

by AsxLoversxGo

  • Poetry
  • Lyrical

Published October 11, 2010

Spoiler! :
as you all should know I love Alice in Wonderland (though it's not my favorite Disney movie...it's Peter Pan), and I really like the web comic When Curiosity Met Insanity. And basically that web comic inspired me to write this, because we all know the Mad Hatter is awesome. Really, I'm talking to the Mad Hatter in the book and the many Hattters in Disneyland/the original Disney movie.



You’re mad, but I love you.
You have no sense of style, but I love you.
You’re more than just obsessed with tea, but I love you.
Your accent comes from nowhere, but I love you.
Your riddles have no answers, but I love you.
You say many things that make no sense, but I love you.
Your hat is ten times bigger than your head, but I love you.
Your friends are just about as insane as you, but I love you.
You can’t sing to save your life, but I love you.
You’re a bit of a jerk sometimes, but I love you.
Your only hobby is having tea, but I love you.
You butter your watch, but I love you.
Your watch doesn’t tell the time, but I love you.
You’re the mad hatter, and that’s why I love you.

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BubbleGirl
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BubbleGirl commented Comment · Oct 11, 2010

I agree with SilentRain, I like this poem a lot, and the Mad Hatter is utterly awesome, but maybe leaving off a couple 'I love you's' would give your poem a better rythym.
Even so, the poem is cool!
Keep on writing!

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SilentRain
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SilentRain wrote a review Review · Oct 11, 2010

Well, I really like this. I just don't think that it sounds good with all the "but I love you"s at the end of every line, maybe at the end of only a few would make it sound better?? Well, I too, Love Alice in Wonderland, I want to name my first little girl Alice! (NOT feom Twilight, from Alice in Wonderland) This is good, I really liked it, other then what I have already pointed out...

~Rain~

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Krp0
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Krp0 commented Comment · Oct 11, 2010

I love it. Can't wait to see more of your poems!



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