SilentRain

Hello, Rain here, so I aposlutly LOVE this poem! It is so great! The theme was really good and it was really nicely written. I think you need to go ...

Hello, so, for a first attempt at poetry, this is good. Well, I have a habit a nit-picking apart a poem so, here goes: Walking down the line What's gonna ...

Hello, Rain here, I really liked this, I do have a few comments and suggestions though. Red- Needs to be changed to be grammerly correct. Blue- Suggestions based on my ...

Hello, I'm Rain, so here is what I have to say: Why do I do this to myself? I'm causing myself my own pain.

Hello, here at last, sorry it took so long. So here are my nit picks: The words register , for the thousandth time , in a mind where they are ...

Hello, sorry it took so long for me to get to this, I've been busy, but here I am. First off, I really liked this, it is a pretty well ...

Hello!! So, I really liked this, I found it had a nice flow and it never once seemed tedeous or anything of that nature. So, here are my little nit- ...

Hello! Sorry it has taken so long for me to get to this. Well, here goes-- So, I like all the metophors, I like the theme, and how you wrote ...

Wow, that is all I have to say about this. Wow! This is a wonderful poem! wish I could say more, but I am stumpled! This is by far one ...

Hello agian! So, to start of, there are many things I like about this, and also many things I think can be chaged to make this better... So, here goes, ...

Hello! Here as promised!! Ok, so, this s like a situation I'm caught in right now acculy... Okay, so, to business! First of, I like the theme, I like how ...

Ok so, first off, this seemed like a varitiy of other poems that I have read... Most of the lines said things I've heard many many times before. The lines ...

Wow, the way you made the whole poem to come back to the red silk noose is wonderful. This poem has some good imagry as well, which makes up the ...

Hello, Rain hear, I don't know, I kind off like this. If you wrote more to it, I'm sure this would be a pretty good poem. Now its good, I ...

Hello!! Well, I really like this. I think the best thing you can do though is make it longer. Two or three stanza's more will make this so great. The ...