SilentRain

I like this poem, but I do have a few suggestions... If I fall, will you catch me? If I trip, will you help me up? If I stumble, will ...

Just a quick review... I really really really love the first verse The philosopher has lost his mind, The artist has lost his brush, The poet has lost his pencil, ...

Very good poem!! I think that if you add comas and periods it will flow a little better and be easier to read... I move as wind in the leaves ...

I like this, It is a nice poem and it reminds me of how my little sister writes... Love is hard Hard like a stone A stone easy to hold ...

Hello, Well, I like the poem but the way you formated it just makes it hard to read. I lay in bed, Watching. I look at the flying bird outside ...

Hello, This is a great poem! I like how you but the idea that you can be beautiful outside but horrid on the inside, I have a few suggestions though... ...

I like this poem. I like the words. But it reads like a paragraph, I think that if you format it like a poem it will read more like a ...

Well, I like the topic, I think that if you made it rhyme or changed some words to make it have better rhythm it may be eaiser to read... I ...

I really like this poem! It is truthful and tells about how alot of people feel but are to prideful to admit... I like the last line of the last ...

I like this poem, it is sad but strong, I don't really see many mistakes but I do wonder, What is this person running from, is it there life, or ...

Wow! :D this is great!! expesaly for your first poem!!! I really like how you use all you sences to describe the forbide love!!! It's great!!! :smt003

I think that this could be better... I like the theme. I think that you should write the second stanza differantly, I had trouble getting it when I was reading ...