Shizzley

I really enjoyed you description of the common homeless man and its really made me see them in a different light. I used to believe that they didn't have a ...

I thought that this poem was very linked to today's society and how girl's must feel. You did a very good job with it and it was very deep, and ...

Hey and welcome to YWS, I'm kind of new myself, so, HIGH FIVE!!!! I haven't got much to say about this poem; I haven't read the book you've based it ...

This is a really good poem! I loved your choice of language; it was confusing at times, but in some weird way, it kind of set the mood and emotion. ...

Hey, I just thought I'd have a go at reviewing this as I saw that no one else had, I just like the feeling of being first to review. Makes ...

Making up poems as you go along is a good way to start a poem as you have a fresh idea in your head. However, after you've scribbled it down, ...

This poem is simply very soothing, it touches on a beautiful subject and really does set your mind at peace so well done with it. Now, onto the nit-picks! If ...

This is a really interesting and unique story which I really enjoyed reading as you used your imagination really well when creating characters out of body parts and stories to ...

I do actually love this poem. It's beautifully simple and I haven't read a book of this subject before so you did well in writing it. Now, on to the ...

This is a really moving poem with emotion and heart. You used interesting and descriptive language and the metaphors you used really set a scene in your head. I like ...

Wow! This is an amazing piece filled with emotion and metaphorical images. My only complaint is that you don't vary your punctuation enough. Try using a semi-clom is some lines, ...

Hello and welcome to YWS, I'm kind of new myself so I will try to review as best as I possibly can, but, I warn you, I can be harsh. ...

This is really clever and I could relate to it really well seeing as I always used to be scared that there was something hiding in my wardrobe! Although, because ...

This poem showed emotion through the varity of techniques ehich you used such as onomatopoeia, rhyme, and a regular beat and pattern. Although it could be a bit longer as ...

Wow! This is quite amazing! You're choice of words are old-fashioned however the story has a modern twist to it. I really loved it and it increased my vocabulary as ...