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Re: The Girl in the Cardinal Dress
Hello, I will be reviewing your story today. First of all, i must say , this story was really really nice. I absolutely loved the way you wrote it and ...
Jul 3, 2013 -
Re: Ghost of winter
Welcome to YWS!! I will reviewing your work today. great work i must say!! i Absolutely loved your style of writing. It was simple, realistic and very believable!! If this ...
Jul 1, 2013 -
Re: deleted
Haha that's a very clever way to convince the readers not to expect an ending. I liked the casual and clever way you wrote this piece. I don't know if ...
Jul 1, 2013 -
Re: operation imperial [prologue]
Ohk!!! so i FINALLY read your prologue. Well, for a start this is really good. It will hook up people as to what will be coming next. And that is ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Afraid
Very well written. Not cliche as i was expecting it to be. You talked in a very simple way which somewhere seemed metaphorical adding to the effect. I liked your ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Eternity
Really nice!! I liked it a lot. the descriptions are nice and you seem good at poetry. however remember to keep stanzas. it makes it easier for people to read ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Steam.
Haha i find this piece very funny and casually written. But don't mind that as this casualty is what makes it so awesome! You wrote such an apt poem for ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Collision
Yesss! The poem was amazing!! It had everything!! An amazing theme, a cool rhyming scheme, metaphors. The shortness gave the poem a good effect and it did interest the readers. ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The girl behind that veil.
A very nice piece i must say. Though i feel it would have had a better effect if it would have been written in the form of a poetry. Since ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Bracelet Connextion
This was really nice, considering that you had written this for someone special! I loved the way you explained everything in detail. This made the poem very interesting to read. ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: HIMALAYAN TSUNAMI
Wow!! The ending was just PERFECT!! I really liked this sad yet eye-opener poem of yours. Now let me start with what i liked about your piece of work: 1. ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The Escape
Hello, I really liked this poem of yours. It had a narrative approach and i like poems that narrate stories. What I like about the poem: 1. The first line ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: My Eyes
Hello, I will be reviewing your poem today. This is my fifteenth review and i have come across the most beautiful poems and this is definitely one of them. So ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The Mirror
The main thing that your poem does is personification. Personification is a great technique to enhance any poem which you did very well. Now let's start with the first stanza: ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Deception
Nice and short piece of poem. And the title is also very nice. I liked the PETTY and PRETTY thing you had in your poem. When you said 'pretty girls' ...
Jun 29, 2013
