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Re: Blame
This was really good. A little dark, a little light, a good mixture of both. It's spine chilling, to me, who has been so very close to this unnamed character's ...
Feb 3, 2014 -
Re: Josiah
Oh... My... Gosh... You seriously have no idea how hard I cried just now. This piece... It was absolutely amazing. The emotion and depth you put into this... It was ...
Feb 2, 2014 -
Re: The World is Our Stage
Awww. Poor dear. =\ I'll keep the family in my prayers. This song is amazing, though. It's passionate, it's meaningful, it's heartfelt. It can be used to portray a lover's ...
Feb 2, 2014 -
Re: Paper Window View
This is really great. It's simple, and rhymes/flows really well. Just because it's simple, doesn't mean there's not a lot to it, though. There's actually a lot that you said, ...
Feb 1, 2014 -
Re: Down and Out
Short, simple, but you put in a lot of meaning into it. I like poems like this, because even though they're short, they pack a lot of meaning. Read the ...
Feb 1, 2014 -
Re: Best Friends
This was super sweet. Your friend sounds like an amazing best friend. And you were able to get that across so nicely. It flows really well, and makes you feel ...
Feb 1, 2014 -
Re: Breakfast
Baha, wow. This is amazing. *laughs* It's so, so true. It's almost scary, because it pretty much captures my mornings perfectly. Minus the plural "siblings". I only have one sister. ...
Feb 1, 2014 -
Re: A Riddle
I love this. I. Love. this. Your wording is excellent. It flows smoothly, and softly, yet has an impact of so much more. You captured Grace and Salvation, the true ...
Feb 1, 2014 -
Re: For a Friend and another.
This was really good! A little lacking in some punctuation, (I.E. Not enough commas in the line "All the misguided, landslided underhanded underminded things" ) But otherwise, it was great. ...
Jan 31, 2014 -
Re: Mountain Climber
Dawwwwww.
Jan 31, 2014 -
Re: Doll Eyes
This was so sad, and so beautiful, all at once. I'll admit that it got a little confusing at times. Mainly where one second it seemed dark, and then turned ...
Jan 31, 2014 -
Re: Monsters
This is fantastic. Absolutely. I agree with Zedderman, it has deep meaning, and I would be more than thrilled to hear it preformed. Though I think your use of "okay" ...
Jan 31, 2014 -
Re: Soul Mates
Oh my goodness... That was incredible. That ending... I didn't expect it. It was so wrong... Yet, so very right. It's unexpected, and that's what makes the story so impacting. ...
Jan 31, 2014 -
Re: Something Called a Friend
Oh my goodness, this was incredible. It's dramatic, it's heartfelt, and it's so, so true to life. The writing style is captivating, and really draws you in. You feel the ...
Jan 30, 2014 -
Re: Bring me somewhere nice...
I enjoyed this poem very, very much. And, (pardon my being) contrary to AEChronicle, I actually rather liked there being little imagery and detail. It was exactly what he (she? ...
Jan 30, 2014
