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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: Dust To Danger (When We Ruled The Waves Chapter 1)

    Hi, Ryleigha! Okay. How do I say this... Pirates? Check. Enchanted Items? Check. A great start? SIGN ME UP FOR THE NEXT PART! But foist things foist! You did everything ...

    Apr 26, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, General
    Re: The Girl Behind the Smile Chapter 4

    Hello, Angel! What a wonderful chapter this is! Hope for Harper and freedom for the children! If I may say though, it seemed so sudden to have Harper hug Endric ...

    Apr 25, 2020

  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: Black Box

    Hellllooooooo, Jen! Okay. First of all, wow. Second, I'm like... This is relatable- like, Very relatable. For me, at least (been through so many breakups and even recently got cheated ...

    Apr 25, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, General
    Re: The Girl Behind the Smile Chapter 3

    Hi, Angel! Your friendly neighborhoodie ShallowHouse had just read your chapter and may I say... I didn't expect Endric to be back! My opinion turned into a 180 because of ...

    Apr 24, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, General
    Re: The Girl Behind the Smile Chapter 2

    Hi, AngelLily! Oh boy, this is a very interesting chapter! I like how you portrayed the other girls, who have obviously gone through a very traumatic experience- enough to make ...

    Apr 24, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, General
    Re: The Girl Behind the Smile Chapter 1

    Hello, AngelLily! I like your style! It's direct without any mincing of words and whatnot. And the cliffhanger! Wow! I'm dying to know what's next! You've done a great job ...

    Apr 24, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Health, Science Fiction
    Re: (Untitled) Chapter 2

    Hi, Queen! Once again, I am very much in love with your story! It's so different, it's so cool! I didn't notice that Willow was disabled in the first chapter. ...

    Apr 24, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Health
    Re: (Untitled)

    HELLO, QUEEN! (yas, queen!) Let's get this out of the way first: I. LOVE. IT. I'm really invested in Willow and I'm in love with her dog, Midnight! Willow has ...

    Apr 24, 2020

  • Article / Essay » Romantic, Realistic
    Re: love exists

    Hi, Diphylleia! I'm digging this so much! I love that you're giving me thoughts I've never stopped to think about and that's amazing. With that said, at a technical standpoint... ...

    Apr 24, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter One

    Hi, felistia! Might I say, this is EX-QUI-SIT-UHH! (made the "uhh" sound because that's how great this is!) Seeing that this chapter is from last year and that I'm sure ...

    Apr 24, 2020

  • Art » Dramatic, Theatre
    Re: me and whose I talk to

    HI, DIPHY! Your piece is super interesting! It's not quite poetry but it's so darn close! You've got a lot of potential- a diamond in the rough! There's a lot ...

    Apr 23, 2020

  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: Lolo's Wake

    Hi, Xerphrox! This is a wonderful piece and thank you for the clarification in the beginning! Many people would have been confused as to what a barong is. With that ...

    Apr 23, 2020

  • Short Story » General, Fantasy
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    Apr 22, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative
    Re: A Story - Chapter 1: The Beginning

    Hi, animoo! I just want to start off by saying that I like your beginning. You've got me pulled- it feels like the moment where Bilbo left everything for Frodo ...

    Apr 21, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction
    Re: Chapter 1

    Hello, Acatonthemoon! Let me just start off with how much I love how you effortlessly conveyed in just one chapter who Ferryn is, her personality and what she's capable of, ...

    Apr 21, 2020

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