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Hi, Ryleigha! Okay. How do I say this... Pirates? Check. Enchanted Items? Check. A great start? SIGN ME UP FOR THE NEXT PART! But foist things foist! You did everything ...

Hello, Angel! What a wonderful chapter this is! Hope for Harper and freedom for the children! If I may say though, it seemed so sudden to have Harper hug Endric ...

Hellllooooooo, Jen! Okay. First of all, wow. Second, I'm like... This is relatable- like, Very relatable. For me, at least (been through so many breakups and even recently got cheated ...

Hi, Angel! Your friendly neighborhoodie ShallowHouse had just read your chapter and may I say... I didn't expect Endric to be back! My opinion turned into a 180 because of ...

Hi, AngelLily! Oh boy, this is a very interesting chapter! I like how you portrayed the other girls, who have obviously gone through a very traumatic experience- enough to make ...

Hello, AngelLily! I like your style! It's direct without any mincing of words and whatnot. And the cliffhanger! Wow! I'm dying to know what's next! You've done a great job ...

Hi, Queen! Once again, I am very much in love with your story! It's so different, it's so cool! I didn't notice that Willow was disabled in the first chapter. ...

HELLO, QUEEN! (yas, queen!) Let's get this out of the way first: I. LOVE. IT. I'm really invested in Willow and I'm in love with her dog, Midnight! Willow has ...

Hi, Diphylleia! I'm digging this so much! I love that you're giving me thoughts I've never stopped to think about and that's amazing. With that said, at a technical standpoint... ...

Hi, felistia! Might I say, this is EX-QUI-SIT-UHH! (made the "uhh" sound because that's how great this is!) Seeing that this chapter is from last year and that I'm sure ...

HI, DIPHY! Your piece is super interesting! It's not quite poetry but it's so darn close! You've got a lot of potential- a diamond in the rough! There's a lot ...

Hi, Xerphrox! This is a wonderful piece and thank you for the clarification in the beginning! Many people would have been confused as to what a barong is. With that ...

Hi, animoo! I just want to start off by saying that I like your beginning. You've got me pulled- it feels like the moment where Bilbo left everything for Frodo ...

Hello, Acatonthemoon! Let me just start off with how much I love how you effortlessly conveyed in just one chapter who Ferryn is, her personality and what she's capable of, ...