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Re: Assassins Creed
Hey man, I apologize for being late. Hope you didn't mind. Okay, So the main problem ( I think) here is: you. Yes, you. You have to calm down. Because ...
Nov 22, 2012 -
Re: LIFE TAKES ITS OWN SHAPE
“You cannot find peace by avoiding life.” ― Virginia Woolf Although the quotation above more or less states what I think about your concern I'd really like to talk about ...
Nov 20, 2012 -
Re: Leaking Words
Why are you posting the same work again and again with different titles?
Nov 20, 2012 -
Re: lost/found?
" When will I be able to sing this words" --Nemesis (the band) Hello Vidhya, I think we haven't been introduced before. I'm Puck. It's nice to meet you. My ...
Nov 19, 2012 -
Re: Red Winter
I think we should not pick on people who has the decency to delete their work believing they can do better.
Nov 16, 2012 -
Re:
Hey! The concept is pretty good. The story seemed quite sensual and well-written. The length was about just right and I happen to like the structure and the repetitions of ...
Nov 14, 2012 -
Re: A letter to S (to those who are afraid to fight their fears)
Hey Klara, Puck here to say a few words. I really love the way you wrote it( as a letter) But the whole thing seemed, in a way a little ...
Nov 3, 2012 -
Re: The Second Star to the Right- Chapter 1
I hereby have attached an open letter to one Ms. Alice Gamble. For the desk of: Ms. Alice Gamble, Currently in Sixth form From the desk of: Puck, A reader ...
Oct 31, 2012 -
Re: Unmarked
Hey Kait, I'm Puck and I'm here to review this piece. I hope this is the first chapter. My suggestions and comments will be in green whilst obvious grammatical stuff ...
Oct 22, 2012 -
Re: I was freakin'
I know the feeling. I mean, you hope that the situation will change and will be more stable in the near future, but it never seems to do. that's how ...
Oct 22, 2012 -
Re: The Summer of '69 *Edited Version*
Good story! One thing though, I was laying in the yard, sunbathing and reading the Catcher and the Rye. If you are referring to that awesome J.D Salinger book then ...
Oct 11, 2012 -
Re: Savior
Hello Ariel, It's been a while since I have done a review so I might be a little rough. thus, be prepared. here goes, My mind creams, begging for someone ...
Oct 6, 2012 -
Re: J&R- Chapter One
Hey Pix, I confess I am a fan of your prose. they are detailed, lovely and fresh. You are a very good writer and I've been meaning to try my ...
Sep 30, 2012 -
Re: Out the hollows where the swallow nests
Hello Klara, This piece has given me the same effect your last piece did. You are really talented. Do not forget that. This piece is so minimalist and simple and ...
Sep 30, 2012 -
Re: When Words Can't Describe
Hey there, My first thought after reading= Original. this is good; really good. I mean it. Your prose doesn't use descriptions to describe a scene. rather it uses just a ...
Sep 23, 2012
