Snow is a tricky thing, it seeps through your clothes and skin, into your bones and grips them with an icy fist. It seizes your heart, your lungs, crystallizes them, ruptures them. It hurts. Snow hurts, more than anything I've ever felt before. I think I'd rather burn to death. Yes, I'd rather burn.
((Okay so I put this here in literally about a minute and a half because apparently you can't delete things you've posted and this post was originally meant to be deleted. This is just something so the topic is not completely bare and weird looking.))
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I actually still don't know how to delete it so...
Hmm. Good question. I tried with one of mine, doesn't seem to be a way to. Based on my rudimentary knowledge of how YWS works, I would say you can't, as of yet. So this'll have to stick around for a while.
Cheers~
Ita
Guess I should put something here then...
Yah, or, when you have something you feel is better, just edit this so you save points.
I think we should not pick on people who has the decency to delete their work believing they can do better.
Heya RiesePiecey, Ita here to review.
Man, I love when pieces like these pop up. They show that there's always a write around willing to do the unconventional. You never know what two blank rows of dots mean, the hidden depths you could be going to here, the gulf of infinity and all that jazz. Really makes you think, doesn't it? Although the choice of title confuses me. 'Red Winter' doesn't really match the meaning expressed here so aptly. Maybe you might want to edit that.
So yeah, hope this helped~
Ita
seriously though, is this just a place-holder? Or did you delete it? Either way, if this becomes something, shoot me a PM and I'll review it. Maybe.
Ita, out
Actually I was planning on deleting it when I woke up because I haven't been here in a while and the site confused me a bit, especially because I was logged on with my IPad instead of my laptop. Thanks, however, for that sarcastic and rude comment because I love waking up to things like that to kick start my morning. I appreciate your contribution and will take it into account whenever I start writing something else.
-RP
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