ShakespeareWallah

Hey Mihaivisan, Nice to see you posting stuff here again. This was really graphic and there wasn't much story going on. But you did say it's a teaser of something ...

Hey Ocean, The story you have here is quite good. I also like how you kept the-terrifying-thing-she-was-going-to-do secret. I think you should break down the first para because it's a ...

Hei there. I really like lists. They are lovely and short. 1~"Curious" is spelled wrong in the first point. 2~ true. In a sense. 4~I'm not familiar with it. I ...

I can relate to this. I really can. It's really enjoying to see people writing about this transaction through genre-stuff to actual literature. Recently I have found myself on a ...

Hey Jes, Your story is interesting and the serious ending took me by surprise as I was expecting a more teen-com end. Personally, I like when writers conceal identities because ...

Hi there, I see that you are new so welcome! Hope you stick around. I haven't reviewed for a while so please forgive any inconveniences. Many call it home, I ...

Nice song!, man.

hey flora, My suggestions are in brackets. In the depths of the misty marshlands, Shayla an and brandy Brandy ( because it is a name) walk alongside each other. They ...

Hey Amp, This is Puck. My thoughts and suggestions will be in brackets. She closed the book, placed it on the table, (comma not necessary because you have an 'and') ...

Hey Fin, This is not a review, just a comment. Lovely story you've got here. Thought it's a bit short, it gives a general picture of genuine happiness of the ...

Hey Vidhya, As a story I was intrigued in it. It looked as if an allegory to a strong moral in staunch fable style narration. I have to say there ...

Hey there, Right. Pretty original. Such a story of half-sisters has been done many times but they are mostly poorly executed. You told it in a very different light. The ...

Hey Noel, First thing's first, Welcome here! I'm Puck and it's quite nice to meet you. This is neat. Your work is neat. I haven't noticed any grammatical errors, the ...

Hey there, I see that you are new here, so welcome! I'm Puck. It's quite nice to meet you. I like the concept here. But it feels incomplete somehow. Liri, ...

Hey there, Puck here. This is a good concept but you have to work on this. # Every sentence should start with a capital letter. # There's no such thing ...