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Shady

"you really do have the diet of a 7 year old with a liquor license" ~ Atticus

  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: The Life and Death of Belirious Bumble

    Hey Lo! Shady here with your review. Sorry if I repeat anything that’s already been said. Alright...I’m getting interested with young Bel... During his mother’s labor, he even contorted himself ...

    Jan 27, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Other, General Re: Motivation

    Hey Gin! Starleene already gave you a nice review for this, so I'll just brush over the main points that jumped out at me. 'I' is *always* capitalized. I is ...

    Jan 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Literature Re: The Mountain And The Valley

    Hey Sion! You've got a really interesting poem here. I like how you compare two great things in nature, the mountain and the valley-- both inhibiting and sometimes ominous, but ...

    Jan 27, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Horror Re: Undead Earth (Chapter one and Prologue)

    Hey Myth! Shady here with your review. You started this prologue nicely. I’m intrigued. Making their brain ’ s stronger and their senses better ~ “brains”, it’s not possessive, nix ...

    Jan 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Pangs of past

    Hey Lak! Here with your review, as requested. :) Alright, you've got a nice poem here. A tough break up, longing for our former boyfriend/girlfriend, I think we all can ...

    Jan 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: Removed

    Hey Locke! Here at last with your review. Sorry for the wait. I didn’t have 2 hours to sit down and review the chapter, and it took me a few ...

    Jan 8, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Brand New Eyes

    Hey Lylas! Back again with a review you requested... You've already gotten some wonderful critiques from some great poets, some of which conflicting, and I'm not going to even attempt ...

    Jan 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Why?

    Hey Lylas! Here with your review, as requested. I am...less than talented with poetry, I warn you now, but I will attempt this anyway. :) In your first five lines, ...

    Jan 6, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Fantasy Re: Soul's Choice (Part One)

    Hey Aria! Shady here with your review! I tend to give mostly grammatical-oriented reviews, so bear with me if I sound overly nitpicky. I really like how you started it-- ...

    Jan 1, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: science was never my strong point but

    Hey Fire! You've got a really interesting topic here. Science *is* my strong point, which is what drew me to this piece (though, I admit, I expected a short instead ...

    Dec 31, 2012
  • Other » Realistic, Narrative Re: Daddy's Little Girl

    Hey Baerr! Shady here with your review! :D Just before the crack of dawn. ~ I don't think this stand alone, perhaps change the period before it to a comma ...

    Dec 31, 2012
  • Other » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Elder's Secret Pitch

    Hey Teran! I'm not very experienced with writing terms, so I'm not really sure what a 'pitch' is, and am reviewing under the 'any comments are helpful' side of things. ...

    Dec 31, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Masquerader (Prologue)

    Hey Egs! Here with your review, as requested, and looking forward to your novel re-vamped. :D Firstly, I will recommend that you put your reconstructed novel in a new folder. ...

    Dec 31, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Rovaalian. Chapter 1: A day of new things.

    Yo Rirr! Here with your review, at last. Sorry about the wait, I've been sick this past week. :( Anyway, you're familiar with my reviews, so I'll jump straight to ...

    Dec 31, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: The King - Prologue

    Hey Alva! Here with your review, as requested. I hope it's worth your night's anticipation. ;) Alright, firstly, and I think I speak for all blind reviewers when I say ...

    Dec 31, 2012


When a body moves, it's the most revealing thing. Dance for me a minute, and I'll tell you who you are.
— Mikhail Baryshnikov