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Re: The Life and Death of Belirious Bumble
Hey Lo! Shady here with your review. Sorry if I repeat anything that’s already been said. Alright...I’m getting interested with young Bel... During his mother’s labor, he even contorted himself ...
Jan 27, 2013 -
Re: Motivation
Hey Gin! Starleene already gave you a nice review for this, so I'll just brush over the main points that jumped out at me. 'I' is *always* capitalized. I is ...
Jan 27, 2013 -
Re: The Mountain And The Valley
Hey Sion! You've got a really interesting poem here. I like how you compare two great things in nature, the mountain and the valley-- both inhibiting and sometimes ominous, but ...
Jan 27, 2013 -
Re: Undead Earth (Chapter one and Prologue)
Hey Myth! Shady here with your review. You started this prologue nicely. I’m intrigued. Making their brain ’ s stronger and their senses better ~ “brains”, it’s not possessive, nix ...
Jan 27, 2013 -
Re: Pangs of past
Hey Lak! Here with your review, as requested. :) Alright, you've got a nice poem here. A tough break up, longing for our former boyfriend/girlfriend, I think we all can ...
Jan 25, 2013 -
Re: Removed
Hey Locke! Here at last with your review. Sorry for the wait. I didn’t have 2 hours to sit down and review the chapter, and it took me a few ...
Jan 8, 2013 -
Re: Brand New Eyes
Hey Lylas! Back again with a review you requested... You've already gotten some wonderful critiques from some great poets, some of which conflicting, and I'm not going to even attempt ...
Jan 6, 2013 -
Re: Why?
Hey Lylas! Here with your review, as requested. I am...less than talented with poetry, I warn you now, but I will attempt this anyway. :) In your first five lines, ...
Jan 6, 2013 -
Re: Soul's Choice (Part One)
Hey Aria! Shady here with your review! I tend to give mostly grammatical-oriented reviews, so bear with me if I sound overly nitpicky. I really like how you started it-- ...
Jan 1, 2013 -
Re: science was never my strong point but
Hey Fire! You've got a really interesting topic here. Science *is* my strong point, which is what drew me to this piece (though, I admit, I expected a short instead ...
Dec 31, 2012 -
Re: Daddy's Little Girl
Hey Baerr! Shady here with your review! :D Just before the crack of dawn. ~ I don't think this stand alone, perhaps change the period before it to a comma ...
Dec 31, 2012 -
Re: Elder's Secret Pitch
Hey Teran! I'm not very experienced with writing terms, so I'm not really sure what a 'pitch' is, and am reviewing under the 'any comments are helpful' side of things. ...
Dec 31, 2012 -
Re: The Masquerader (Prologue)
Hey Egs! Here with your review, as requested, and looking forward to your novel re-vamped. :D Firstly, I will recommend that you put your reconstructed novel in a new folder. ...
Dec 31, 2012 -
Re: Rovaalian. Chapter 1: A day of new things.
Yo Rirr! Here with your review, at last. Sorry about the wait, I've been sick this past week. :( Anyway, you're familiar with my reviews, so I'll jump straight to ...
Dec 31, 2012 -
Re: The King - Prologue
Hey Alva! Here with your review, as requested. I hope it's worth your night's anticipation. ;) Alright, firstly, and I think I speak for all blind reviewers when I say ...
Dec 31, 2012
