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"you really do have the diet of a 7 year old with a liquor license" ~ Atticus

  • Poetry » Other, Science Re: Worlds Away From Us-NaPow 2

    Hey Katnes, Shady back with another review for you! Let's get started... Honestly as I'm reading through this I can't decide if I really like it or kinda feel meh ...

    Apr 23, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: The Crown Of Me-NaPow 1

    Hey Katnes, Shady here with a review for your lovely little NaPo poem! A bit of a disclaimer before I begin, I am not overly experienced with poetry. I've written ...

    Apr 23, 2018
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Closed.

    Hey eccendentesiast, Shady here with a review for your short story~ I see you're new here, so a great big welcome to you! If you need any help finding anything ...

    Apr 23, 2018
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: The Gambling Man

    Hey ChristianKeener, Shady here with a review for you! I see you're new to the site, so a great big welcome to you! If you need any help finding your ...

    Apr 23, 2018
  • Other » Realistic, General Re: Young Lady in a Fishbowl

    Hey CoffeeCat, Shady here with a review for you! As you requested help on punctuation as well as whether this is interesting enough to continue, that is where I will ...

    Apr 23, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic Re: Always in A Blue Moon - Chapter One: Change

    Hey Lupin, Shady here with a quick review for you! Usually I read through a story and give critiques as I find them, but after reading all the way through ...

    Apr 23, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: First Darkness of Day

    Hey Radrook, Shady here to rescue your poem from the Green Room! A quick disclaimer, I am not overly experienced with poetry. I can point out things that I did ...

    Apr 23, 2018
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Literature Re: -

    Hey sarasanfran, Shady here with a review for you! I see you're new to the site, so a great big welcome to you! If you need any help finding where ...

    Apr 23, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Risen - chapter one

    Hey elysian! Shady here with a review for you! My first gut-reaction is to really like this story. You started it off very well, and I like the tone of ...

    Apr 23, 2018
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: Insecurities (??? Edited )

    Hey adelaide, Shady here with a review for you! I think you have a really powerful start to this poem. I mean there are a plethora of angsty poems about ...

    Mar 8, 2018
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Little Wooden Cross

    Hey LadyShadows, Shady here with a review for your poem. First of all, I'm sorry about your uncle. That is really rough to go through, and I think it's sweet ...

    Mar 8, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Ten 6-word short stories

    Hey TheBlueCat, Shady here with a review to both rescue your work from the Green Room and participate in review day ;) I really like these. Typically I'm not into ...

    Feb 25, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Chapter 16 of Princess of the Sea

    Hey lelu, Shady back for the final review for this novel, since this is the furthest chapter you've posted so far. Just wanted to take a moment at the beginning ...

    Feb 25, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Chapter 15 of Princess of the Sea

    Hey lelu, Shady back yet again. Are you getting tired of me yet? ;) This looks like another fairly short chapter, so I'll jump in and see what I can ...

    Feb 25, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Chapter 14 of Princess of the Sea

    Hey lelu, Shady here for the next chapter! I'm starting to run out of reviewing steam, but I'll do my best to keep at it until I get through all ...

    Feb 25, 2018


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