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Re: Worlds Away From Us-NaPow 2
Hey Katnes, Shady back with another review for you! Let's get started... Honestly as I'm reading through this I can't decide if I really like it or kinda feel meh ...
Apr 23, 2018 -
Re: The Crown Of Me-NaPow 1
Hey Katnes, Shady here with a review for your lovely little NaPo poem! A bit of a disclaimer before I begin, I am not overly experienced with poetry. I've written ...
Apr 23, 2018 -
Re: Closed.
Hey eccendentesiast, Shady here with a review for your short story~ I see you're new here, so a great big welcome to you! If you need any help finding anything ...
Apr 23, 2018 -
Re: The Gambling Man
Hey ChristianKeener, Shady here with a review for you! I see you're new to the site, so a great big welcome to you! If you need any help finding your ...
Apr 23, 2018 -
Re: Young Lady in a Fishbowl
Hey CoffeeCat, Shady here with a review for you! As you requested help on punctuation as well as whether this is interesting enough to continue, that is where I will ...
Apr 23, 2018 -
Re: Always in A Blue Moon - Chapter One: Change
Hey Lupin, Shady here with a quick review for you! Usually I read through a story and give critiques as I find them, but after reading all the way through ...
Apr 23, 2018 -
Re: First Darkness of Day
Hey Radrook, Shady here to rescue your poem from the Green Room! A quick disclaimer, I am not overly experienced with poetry. I can point out things that I did ...
Apr 23, 2018 -
Re: -
Hey sarasanfran, Shady here with a review for you! I see you're new to the site, so a great big welcome to you! If you need any help finding where ...
Apr 23, 2018 -
Re: The Risen - chapter one
Hey elysian! Shady here with a review for you! My first gut-reaction is to really like this story. You started it off very well, and I like the tone of ...
Apr 23, 2018 -
Re: Insecurities (??? Edited )
Hey adelaide, Shady here with a review for you! I think you have a really powerful start to this poem. I mean there are a plethora of angsty poems about ...
Mar 8, 2018 -
Re: Little Wooden Cross
Hey LadyShadows, Shady here with a review for your poem. First of all, I'm sorry about your uncle. That is really rough to go through, and I think it's sweet ...
Mar 8, 2018 -
Re: Ten 6-word short stories
Hey TheBlueCat, Shady here with a review to both rescue your work from the Green Room and participate in review day ;) I really like these. Typically I'm not into ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 16 of Princess of the Sea
Hey lelu, Shady back for the final review for this novel, since this is the furthest chapter you've posted so far. Just wanted to take a moment at the beginning ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 15 of Princess of the Sea
Hey lelu, Shady back yet again. Are you getting tired of me yet? ;) This looks like another fairly short chapter, so I'll jump in and see what I can ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 14 of Princess of the Sea
Hey lelu, Shady here for the next chapter! I'm starting to run out of reviewing steam, but I'll do my best to keep at it until I get through all ...
Feb 25, 2018
