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Hi Clark! The title of your piece attracted me to it, so here's a review. I'll try to go bit by bit in order, so here it goes. In the ...

Hey Untitled, I'm Caterpickle! This was really great, I loved how it started out as a guy's normal morning, just bring up the head at the end of paragraphs. At ...

Hi Sunset101! Great poem, I thought. There are just a few things that made it feel less real to me. The way you used the word "shattered" twice, made it ...

Hi Pompadour, Caterpickle here. I really liked your poem. I didn't understand it, but that's a me thing, not a you thing. I never really got all the metaphors and ...

Wow, when I read the description of him leaving her, I thought you meant him abandoning her for something else. I did not expect him to die! Wow, that's so ...

Hey Dusty! Quick review: I really liked how you kept building the confidence you had in yourself as you got closer to the end. It was nice that you started ...

Hey there Rainbow! Caterpickle just swooping down to catch a poem to review! (I got one!) This poem was nice, quaint, and...well, that pretty much sums it up. It wasn't ...

Hi FallWolf, I'm Caterpickle! I really enjoyed this short story. I absolutely love the metaphors you used within it, like the one about the gun hitting the cardboard box, how ...

Yo yo yo tigeraye! Caterpickle here for a quick two-minutes-until-dinner review! I thought that this was very funny, and I could imagine Louie's pain, because the mayor sounds like my ...

Hi there! I saw this short, and thought it looked interesting, so I read it. I enjoyed the underlying themes and basic plot, but overall, I was a little confused. ...

Wow! Not gonna lie, I kind of expected this to be a little...I don't know, maybe...unemotional, and kind of childish, in the sense that the misspelled words would make it ...

Hi tigeraye! Caterpickle dropping by for review time! I thought that this was a nice little story. When I saw the words in red at the top, saying how it ...

Hi Noelle! It's me, Caterpickle! I absolutely loved your short, and I wished it wasn't so short, because I was so engaged the entire time I was reading it. I ...

Hi Joy! I really liked the way this is written, and only have a few tidbits (this is my second review ever, so give me some leeway :p). First off, ...

Hi, ladcat13, this is my first review EVER, so sorry if it's not what you're looking for. The whole time while I was reading this, I was smiling and nodding, ...