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Hi Dracula! This was a cute little story. I saw below that creativeslayer365 said that "Wilfred" was from something else. I don't know anything about this, but if this story ...

Hey Sergeant! I really liked this idea. I'm a sucker for that futuristic category of writing. I liked how accurate all your inferences were about the future. You made it ...

Candyyyyy! This is so inspiring, and there are so many connections throughout the poem! I know you said below that this isn't your type of poetry, but I wish it ...

Hey deathwave1, I'm Caterpickle. I really loved this poem, it was packed full of a depressed kind of emotion, a raw, desperate desire for someone to be close, but to ...

Hi Chips, just gonna write a quick review. This was a good poem, and unless I'm wrong, you were trying to reflect on the idea that maybe people should look ...

Hi coehl. I really felt all of the pain that you unleashed through this poem (I hope this isn't a true story ^^). This was really moving, and I understood ...

Hi fellow dog-lover (dogs do rule!), I have arrived at your reviewing party! I thought this was an optimistic look on life. It was heartening that you kept saying "it ...

Hey Hatty, Caterpickle here. This was a quaint little story, and I liked your descriptions of the old man, and his old-man-like outfit. The part about his mustache and fedora ...

Oh my god! What happened?! What's going on?! I'm so upset by this ending, I can't even tell you. But, ellmist, this was truly brilliant. I was so sad at ...

Wow, Biluata, very moving poem. I read some of the other reviews, and most of them seem to imply that there is some kind of humor within this poem, but ...

Hi cpedro! This is a really pretty poem, and I like that it's not too long for its own good. You were able to describe the scenery very well, and ...

Hi DrFeelGood. This piece is really interesting, and made me think of a puppy sitting in a pound waiting for adoption, and a girl being abused, at the same time. ...

Hi felestia. Similarly to wridingislife, I saw the title and wanted to hear all about it. To be honest, I was picturing the car (how could anyone not, it's a ...

Hi Gravity, Caterpickle here to review this great poem. I'm really glad that you wrote it is such a way that allowed the readers to understand what was going on. ...

Hi artybirdy. I liked the message that your poem tried to convey- it's better to let children make their own mistakes, because it will give them first hand experience in ...