SereneSimpliciT

F*** yes Just F***ing yes This is a BEAUTIFUL setup for the story Being the romance lover I am, I adore the angle between Rahim and Adonia. Honestly, this is ...

Ok, I'm finally reviewing something so ksjdbglkasdjbglasdkjbglksjbg Anywho, as for the story itself, I liked it, it started out interesting, and I like that I honestly didn't know what was ...

I applaud you so much. Honestly, I couldn't of said that better myself. Readers, no matter how much they say they enjoy your work, will always ask if you can ...

I loved the comparison between words and rows of corn (from the middle east of the USA), it speaks so personally to me! XD Alright, I will admit that the ...

Right off the bat, the flow of this is...weird. It cuts off in the middle of phrases, and just feels a bit choppy. It reminded me of when you're on ...

I'm at a complete loss at the moment, so I'm going to do what fortis did, and go through the lines, but I'll only do the first three (you'll know ...

One word: DAMN. That...was possibly one of the best poems I've read here on YWS. Honestly. Why? Dear lord, the way you phrased every line, your vocabulary, the grammar, the ...

If you're a girl, I'm apologizing now before you read the next part (SORRY!) Something tells me that you're male. I don't know why, but while reading this, the main ...

Hello, welcome to YWS! I'm Maddie, and I'm here to review your Poem! On with it then XD Well, this is a nice, simplistic poem. It carries a good amount ...

Welcome to YWS! I'm happy to be your first reviewer, and let us begin ^^ For a first poem, this is pretty good. You definitely capture some whimsy in this ...

Wow....that was...really mature and adult. The visuals of this piece are simply pristine, I love the way you draw the scene with your words, as if I was with this ...

Alright, all in all, this is a pretty solid 1st short story. I like how you described her sadness and her reaction to the break-up, it's very realistic and humanistic. ...

I. Fucking. Love. You. This is amazing, I have never read something and actually gotten goosebumps until I read this poem. I love that this is also rhyming, even though ...

I don't know if this is supposed to be funny or slightly scary XDDD Due to the fact that I read the little splurge you put, I'm guessing you're talking ...

For a first piece, I must say, well done. This appears to be a combination of both rhyming and free-verse, which I'm surprised I don't see a lot of, at ...