SeleneForeverDream

Hey ashley! I'd just like to say that I read your other chapter and loved it! You've got me hooked on this story now. :D Nit-Picks : Her mother sat ...

Hiya Summer! I'm Selene and I shall be your reviewer for today. ^_^ Nit-Picks: But they beg her and beg her Until she finally gaves in to her thirst. It ...

Hey Jemima! I don't believe we've met *shakes hand* I'm Selene and it's nice to meet you! I'll also be your reviewer for today. ^_^ Nit-Picks : tears of the ...

Hey Kat! I'm here to review! :D Nit-Picks : Specially threats directed to his alarm clock. You should put an apostrophe in front of "specially" to show that it's informal, ...

Hey there moonstar! Selene's here to review! :D Nit-Picks : All I had on was some trackie bottoms and sweater. Which was cleverly named because I was sweating my ass ...

Hey burgs! Me again. ^_^ Nit-Picks: Why is it that the good dye young? 'Dye' should be die. 'Cos i just can't take much more. I've never heard 'cos' before... ...

Hey there burgs! Nit-Picks : My eyes they did dart from wall to wall, but nothing I saw, not nothing at all. 'Not' is unnecessary. Perhaps, as a suggestion. 'it ...

Hiya Jessie and welcome to YWS! I'm Selene and it's a pleasure to meet you. ^_^ Here, we have a few simple rules that must be followed: ~Please review at ...

Hiya Shina! Selene's here and happy to review! :D Nit-Picks (or nit-pick in this case xD) All that you took Is all that you'll take; Those sugar-coated numbers All equal ...

Hiya Llama! Selene's here to review! :D Nit-Picks: But hate to return to what's real. I don't really like the repetition here with your two "to"'s. I think it would ...

Hiya Greyed! Glad to see you've reviewed. ;) I am here to review! Nit-Picks : The dancing moonlight, stars abri *looks up 'abri'* Nope, it's not a word. I suppose ...

Welcome to YWS, always! :D Here we have a few simple rules that should be followed: ~Please review at least two pieces of work on YWS before posting your own. ...

Hey, I'm here to review! *cracks knuckles* Let's get to it! Nit-Picks : Another era another adventure, There should be a comma after 'era'. time to go see hidden treasures, ...

Heya Young! I'm here to dish out some nit-pickings! ^_^ Nit-Picks: ……And so they said to this little boy of eight, If he went on dreaming doom would be his ...

Hiya Kamas! Selene is here to review! :D Nit-Picks : By what she was. Eh, this isn't really a good second sentence. It's a sentence fragment, so maybe you could ...