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Re: Bloodshot Eyes with a Fake Smile for Disguise
Bonjour my petite crumpet. How art though on thist sacred morn? Anyways, onto the review. Let's hope Mrs.Varnold doesn't catch me! I'm going to quote each sentence and says likes ...
May 22, 2014 -
Re: Let Me Scream
Hey hey hey hey. It's cheese here for another quick review. I would do longer ones but I don't want Mrs.Varnold to catch me. Anyways, I'll go through likes and ...
May 22, 2014 -
Re: Goodbye
Touché my friend, touché. I'll be here to review your poems since you seem to want to review all of mine. Since I'm in between reading and reviewing, this may ...
May 22, 2014 -
Re: Watch
Hey! I'm here to give a quick review. First off, nitpicks. You can scream at the sight, When you do I can see your fear. You can scream at the ...
May 8, 2014 -
Re: Can you? Will you?
Hello! SecreteJournalist here for a quick review. I'm going to go through nitpicks, first. Can you see my heart? No, but it doesn't mean I don't have one. Will you ...
May 8, 2014 -
Re: The Ignorant
Hello. How are you? If you're still you, of course. That doesn't make much sense though. Oh well. Though this has enough reviews, I want to review this. Just a ...
May 6, 2014 -
Re: You are my Best Friend
Hello. SecreteJournalist here, but do feel free to call me Brie, if you please. Welcome to YWS! I'll be happy to give a quick review to your first poem! I'm ...
May 6, 2014 -
Re: Another Day
Hello! SecreteJournalist here for a quick review. Another day She killed herself That beautiful, wonderful angel She's so inspirational I kind of agree with Henox. This stanza seems off. Now, ...
May 6, 2014 -
Re: She Burns
Hello, Ariel, Dorothy, Rellaya, Sarai, my dead but not dead best friend. How are you? Is life still a big ball of stupid? ANYWAYS, I suppose I'll give a quick ...
May 6, 2014 -
Re: Have I Fallen for you?
Hello! I'm SecreteJournalist, but feel free to call me Brie. Are you enjoying the site so far? Anyways, I'm here for a quick review on your poem! I feel you... ...
May 6, 2014 -
Re: Stronger: Chapter 1
Hello! I'm SecreteJournalist, but most people call me either 'Secret', 'Journalist', 'Brie', or 'Brianna'. Feel free to call me any of those names! Welcome to Young Writers Society, thelonewriter! Are
Apr 28, 2014 -
Re: Hourglass
Hello! I'm SecreteJournalist, but do feel free to call me Brie if you please. I'm a week late, but.. Welcome to Young Writers Society, Savvy! I'm here to give a ...
Apr 28, 2014 -
Re: I Am
Hey! I'm SecreteJournalist, but do feel free to call me Brie if you please. Welcome to Young Writers Society, verymaryanna! I hope you're enjoying the site so far! I'm going ...
Apr 28, 2014 -
Re: Insomniac
Hey, SecreteJournalist here for a quick review! I'm a little late, but.... Welcome to Young Writers Society, danickname! First off, let me just clarify this now. Wow. I love this ...
Apr 28, 2014 -
Re: The Definition of Words
Hello! I'm SecreteJournalist, but do feel free to call me Brie if you please. Though I'm just a little bit late... Welcome to Young Writers Society, Luna Clipse! I hope ...
Apr 10, 2014
