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I'm an injured bird, seen but never heard. I want you to take heed, but you've never planted that seed. Good punctuation, grammar, spelling.. this poem has it all! I ...

A sleek sinuous body, A flash of something red, interesting ... caught my attention A sly grin hinting ‘naughty,’ fun A twitching turn of the head. nice A smooth and ...

7am they call it "breaking the fast", in other words: replenishment— like tending tomato plants, or indeed, loving a man. then, you wake up one day and grow tired of ...

To say that I was scared of death was an exaggeration. I did not fear it like other people, yet I had enough common sense to be wary enough of ...

Can't believe I finally get to write this song. Literally on cloud nine and in disbelief. He was worth the wait :) ----- Cute intro! Sounds like you Guys are ...

Anticipate, we do. Anticipate what? Expect the obvious, yes. True, very true But intended surprise belies to our eyes, to make us smile. That's sweet, I like it. and to ...

It's interesting, calming, peaceful, suttle. Really, truly it's great. But I only see one period, punucation is lacking. Also, you are capitalizing EVERY line, instead of every sentence. This is ...

Either than puncuation, this is great. I think I understand it all, but I'm not exactly sure. Remember to only use capitalization at the begging of your sentences. Reading its ...

If I had an English class like this, I would of been in heaven ! I love this, it's creative, fun. A bunch of randomness turned into an organized, beautiful ...

Truly grueling, horrifying, truly magnificent. There are no spelling errors, no incorrect grammar. It's just wonderfully perfect. Throughout the whole poem, it had this feeling that it truly belonged

I love it! The concept of the story is sad, but not too sad, matter offect, but not too much, a perfect balance. Comas , capitalization, Maby making it smaller ...

Life itself can be heaven or hell. There's the good times, but even know as I type there are the bad times. Your poem truly is a gruesome, yet magnificent ...

Rather random, rather funny, rather cute is what this is. The first one was random. It really did not make sense to me at all. But that is good, me ...

Great story, truly entertaining. I wish there was more, it ended so short! For monologue, I won't need to complain at lack of scenery. The title itself interested me. A ...

I love this, it's very creative, and easy to relate too. There are mistakes, but very few, easily fixable. I do see a few misspellings in your work. For example ...