Young Writers Society

This is so short that I honestly thought it was going to be kind of crappy, and I would be kind of confused about what the meaning of it was, but I really enjoyed it. Nice job.

Normally with most short poems such as these, I encourage the writer to go further, but here I think it works. I also like the abnormal alignment of Not to at the end, especially combined with the content of this poem. The grammar is spot on. One thing that I would recommend you change though is taking out "to" in the second to last line and make the period after "smile" into a comma. Your writing style is great and keep up the good work. Good luck and keep writing!
~Kay

Anticipate, we do.

Anticipate what?

Expect the obvious, yes.

True, very true

But intended surprise
belies to our eyes,
to make us smile.

That's sweet, I like it.

and to teach us,

Woah! No capitalization :c

Not to.

Why was this indented so far? And why is it capitalized



Either than a few mistakes, this was pretty sweet. I do wish it was longer, to explain a thing or two. Maybe a better intro would help attract readers faster. Sorry for the short review, not much to review. Anyway, I like the idea throughout this, keep writing, you will go far!